6/15/2009 c1 kta
loved it, but just one thing, in spanish "querido" is darling but for men, for women the word is "querida".
loved it, but just one thing, in spanish "querido" is darling but for men, for women the word is "querida".
6/14/2009 c1 24Amethystars
Loved it. The best part was the surprise... and that she dropped the tea. Great job!
Loved it. The best part was the surprise... and that she dropped the tea. Great job!
6/1/2009 c1 Roman Candles
Awesome story. I love the sexual tension and the clash between the characters. Great job!
Awesome story. I love the sexual tension and the clash between the characters. Great job!
5/31/2009 c1 24Ravina
I thought I reviewed this before, but I guess I didn't. It was so great that I read it a second time, and I fell in love with the story all over again.
Just one thing: "I considered that for a while. “What if your mother-in-law doesn’t like me?”" Isn't that "mother" not "mother-in-law"?
Great job!
- Rebekah
I thought I reviewed this before, but I guess I didn't. It was so great that I read it a second time, and I fell in love with the story all over again.
Just one thing: "I considered that for a while. “What if your mother-in-law doesn’t like me?”" Isn't that "mother" not "mother-in-law"?
Great job!
- Rebekah
5/25/2009 c1 DJ
I must say that now i'm freakin' in love with your storys! You get just the right amount of plot so that it's not straight porn but enough of da nasty to make it good!
I must say that now i'm freakin' in love with your storys! You get just the right amount of plot so that it's not straight porn but enough of da nasty to make it good!
5/12/2009 c1 11MorbidAngelXxX
Okay, I absolutely loved it. I kind of figured that Arman was the one who she was going to get married to, just a hunch. I liked it a lot. =D
Okay, I absolutely loved it. I kind of figured that Arman was the one who she was going to get married to, just a hunch. I liked it a lot. =D
5/6/2009 c1 Hemii25
Someone recommended this story to me and let me tell you, R rated stories are not usually my fave rating but i actually loved this! very good work!
Someone recommended this story to me and let me tell you, R rated stories are not usually my fave rating but i actually loved this! very good work!
4/30/2009 c1 Amy
LOVED IT LOVED IT LOVED IT!
That was seriously one of the sweetest things I've ever read!
LOVED IT LOVED IT LOVED IT!
That was seriously one of the sweetest things I've ever read!
3/27/2009 c1 145young and the reckless
ohmygosh, such a twist! i was all prepared for heartbreak with Sonya having to leave Arman after THAT night, and then WABAM! all's well! fantastic.
y&r
ohmygosh, such a twist! i was all prepared for heartbreak with Sonya having to leave Arman after THAT night, and then WABAM! all's well! fantastic.
y&r
3/27/2009 c1 Cherrysinger
This was a very...hm...blunt story. I live in Canada, GTA, too.
This was a very...hm...blunt story. I live in Canada, GTA, too.