for Among the Ruins12/25/2006 c4 Arielle
This has a lot of potential. Have you decided to discontinue it? I hope you decide to update this.
This has a lot of potential. Have you decided to discontinue it? I hope you decide to update this.
10/29/2005 c4 
25La Velvetine
Aww, this is so cute. Do continue. I love the idea. .. Have them get married in Santorini.
25La VelvetineAww, this is so cute. Do continue. I love the idea. .. Have them get married in Santorini.
5/16/2005 c4 2Lukertin
lol! The I'm his/her fiance story gets them everything! This story has great potential, you'll have to update soon (and I know you've been around.)
2Lukertinlol! The I'm his/her fiance story gets them everything! This story has great potential, you'll have to update soon (and I know you've been around.)
12/23/2004 c4 6Adders721
Loved how Adrian stepped in with the fiancee thing! Can't wait for more! Please update soon!~adders~
6Adders721Loved how Adrian stepped in with the fiancee thing! Can't wait for more! Please update soon!~adders~
12/21/2004 c1 17Nocturnal silhouette
I must confess you have a good story going on here. But something didn't settle right with me. If Damaris is Senior Site Supervisor, that would mean she would at least have her doctorate, especially if she's working for a University like Oxford. But at 23, unless she skipped a college level or two, she would only have her master's, according to the UK system. Even if she went to college in the US she would still have only her master's. While that is a high degree, and most archaeologists are happy with it, it does not qualify to teach at college level. I don't know. I might have read it wrong, so forgive me if I am wrong, and please let me know if I am. But other then that, it is a good story.
17Nocturnal silhouetteI must confess you have a good story going on here. But something didn't settle right with me. If Damaris is Senior Site Supervisor, that would mean she would at least have her doctorate, especially if she's working for a University like Oxford. But at 23, unless she skipped a college level or two, she would only have her master's, according to the UK system. Even if she went to college in the US she would still have only her master's. While that is a high degree, and most archaeologists are happy with it, it does not qualify to teach at college level. I don't know. I might have read it wrong, so forgive me if I am wrong, and please let me know if I am. But other then that, it is a good story.
11/22/2004 c4 Kilala
Hey I don't want to sound harsh or anything, but this is a review right. I understand the hard work of writing a story because I'm working on one too, but writer to writer I can at least offer supportive critism. When she faints and his head swells and stuff he gets really carried away in that honey,darling stuff he doesn't know her, maybe it's attraction at first sight, but somehow it just seems so rushed. I hope you understand what I mean the part where he vows to take responsibility for her care, I mean why? She isn't in in a cast where she can't get up, didn't she just get sunstoke it just seems mussy and over the top. I hope your not trying to rush into where you are with the story because you haven't undated in so long, it's really good, but kinda rushy and it's getting mushy. This is not a flame, I repeat this is not a flame.
Hey I don't want to sound harsh or anything, but this is a review right. I understand the hard work of writing a story because I'm working on one too, but writer to writer I can at least offer supportive critism. When she faints and his head swells and stuff he gets really carried away in that honey,darling stuff he doesn't know her, maybe it's attraction at first sight, but somehow it just seems so rushed. I hope you understand what I mean the part where he vows to take responsibility for her care, I mean why? She isn't in in a cast where she can't get up, didn't she just get sunstoke it just seems mussy and over the top. I hope your not trying to rush into where you are with the story because you haven't undated in so long, it's really good, but kinda rushy and it's getting mushy. This is not a flame, I repeat this is not a flame.
11/18/2004 c4 3Desert Illusion
Ok, now THIS is totally intersting! LOL! He calls her "honey" and "sweetheart" Aw that is soo cute! He just met the girl! LOL!
Anyways, this is another cute story. Hope to see another update from you soon!
3Desert IllusionOk, now THIS is totally intersting! LOL! He calls her "honey" and "sweetheart" Aw that is soo cute! He just met the girl! LOL!
Anyways, this is another cute story. Hope to see another update from you soon!
10/9/2004 c2 Dawn
Excellent beginning -really looking forward to next chapters.
Excellent beginning -really looking forward to next chapters.
9/24/2004 c2 Carla
Yes, you definetly need to continue this story. I've already gotten to attatched to your characters fro you to stop the story.
Yes, you definetly need to continue this story. I've already gotten to attatched to your characters fro you to stop the story.
9/3/2004 c2 7blazing gem
Hello! First of all, I love the fact that this story is set at a site! I always wanted to go to a dig... and *gasp* Damaris fainted! Heat stroke! I've experienced that before, gr... I don't remember much of it, except that I was sorta.. uh... a lump of matter for a while.. Anyways, I'll like to see you update the story, so yeah.. feel free to continue on! ^^
7blazing gemHello! First of all, I love the fact that this story is set at a site! I always wanted to go to a dig... and *gasp* Damaris fainted! Heat stroke! I've experienced that before, gr... I don't remember much of it, except that I was sorta.. uh... a lump of matter for a while.. Anyways, I'll like to see you update the story, so yeah.. feel free to continue on! ^^
9/2/2004 c2 7Steve the Commando
This is a damn good story! When I was reading it, I was actually there at the dig in Greece...seriously! I think that to stop now would be like...um...trying to stop something that is really, really difficult to stop. I think you get the point. Right? Anyway, I think you should keep at it...
7Steve the CommandoThis is a damn good story! When I was reading it, I was actually there at the dig in Greece...seriously! I think that to stop now would be like...um...trying to stop something that is really, really difficult to stop. I think you get the point. Right? Anyway, I think you should keep at it...