for Hilton Academy6/26/2022 c8 Coral
Love this story
Love this story
3/11/2015 c13 
4JayAoi
This story is really great and we'll written, a little cliche but I love cliches so I don't care. I know this story is old and you probably don't look at the reviews for it anymore, but I just had to let you know that I thought it was really cool that Jesse doesn't drink. Actually my name is Jessie too and I can have a really fun time withought drinking and I'm so glad that for once, someone else shares that opinion, even if it's just a fictional characrer. So thanks for that breath of fresh air!
4JayAoiThis story is really great and we'll written, a little cliche but I love cliches so I don't care. I know this story is old and you probably don't look at the reviews for it anymore, but I just had to let you know that I thought it was really cool that Jesse doesn't drink. Actually my name is Jessie too and I can have a really fun time withought drinking and I'm so glad that for once, someone else shares that opinion, even if it's just a fictional characrer. So thanks for that breath of fresh air!
4/14/2013 c2 7Kaitlyn.Marie
I'm sorry! Stupid moment, as I was thinking of a story I was reading last night, where the Jesse is male. My head is clear and focused now :(
7Kaitlyn.MarieI'm sorry! Stupid moment, as I was thinking of a story I was reading last night, where the Jesse is male. My head is clear and focused now :(
4/14/2013 c1 Kaitlyn.Marie
The only thing I have to point out is that you say Jesse and Bridget were/are roommates freshman year, but then you say there are two different dorms for guys and girls. Jesse is male, isn't he? It doesn't quite make sense.
But an awesome chapter anyways. I look forward to the rest of the story!
The only thing I have to point out is that you say Jesse and Bridget were/are roommates freshman year, but then you say there are two different dorms for guys and girls. Jesse is male, isn't he? It doesn't quite make sense.
But an awesome chapter anyways. I look forward to the rest of the story!
2/24/2013 c38 AnonymousReads
If only guys like will were real then life would be perfect. I really liked reading this and wouldn't change a thing. Great story. :)
If only guys like will were real then life would be perfect. I really liked reading this and wouldn't change a thing. Great story. :)
11/25/2012 c38 1leavesfallingup
This is a truly amazing story. It is very difficult to write a story where you maintain the tension throughout the story while only slowly showing progress. It is also difficult to have a main character with such an abrasive reaction toward life and to be able to maintain that attitude, make your readers love her, and then have her change without losing any of what made her unique and interesting in the first place.
I enjoyed Will's character too. Only someone with his incredible patience and self-control could stick it out and allow Jesse to open up at her own pace. Even after she turned to him and they began spending time together he waited patiently for her to pursue intimacy... another difficulty, especially since he was already crazy about her everything about her made him want her.
Very well done. Thank you for sharing your talent with us.
1leavesfallingupThis is a truly amazing story. It is very difficult to write a story where you maintain the tension throughout the story while only slowly showing progress. It is also difficult to have a main character with such an abrasive reaction toward life and to be able to maintain that attitude, make your readers love her, and then have her change without losing any of what made her unique and interesting in the first place.
I enjoyed Will's character too. Only someone with his incredible patience and self-control could stick it out and allow Jesse to open up at her own pace. Even after she turned to him and they began spending time together he waited patiently for her to pursue intimacy... another difficulty, especially since he was already crazy about her everything about her made him want her.
Very well done. Thank you for sharing your talent with us.
7/9/2012 c26 Guest
Why is she so adamant on denying her attraction to Will? I don't understand, what's the problem?
Why is she so adamant on denying her attraction to Will? I don't understand, what's the problem?
7/9/2012 c24 Guest
Oh wow I'm itching to slap a whole lot of sense into her! What was that? Really, just to shake off one person? Wow, she really must be severely commitment-phobic.
Oh wow I'm itching to slap a whole lot of sense into her! What was that? Really, just to shake off one person? Wow, she really must be severely commitment-phobic.
2/1/2012 c38 2KarmaHope
Flipping brilliant. It has well deserved the 1,892ish reviews it has now. Wonderful. Definitely a favorite on my list!
2KarmaHopeFlipping brilliant. It has well deserved the 1,892ish reviews it has now. Wonderful. Definitely a favorite on my list!
10/2/2011 c5 Pseudonym59
At first I was kind of 'Bleh' with Bridget, but after reading her P.O.V., I really like her. :) She's really got that down to Earth quality.
At first I was kind of 'Bleh' with Bridget, but after reading her P.O.V., I really like her. :) She's really got that down to Earth quality.
10/2/2011 c1 Pseudonym59
I can see how Jesse can be a bit intimidating, but then again, she HAS to be.
Great chapter!
I can see how Jesse can be a bit intimidating, but then again, she HAS to be.
Great chapter!
7/8/2011 c38 leavemeialone
FINALLY! AT LAST, they get together. Thanks Jesse for that. :p Just kidding. I do admit this was one of the longer stories that I have read. I really do enjoy it, but it surely hurt my eyes because I was reading it at at such a quick manner of time. I do admit, I hate Jesse at times for her stubbornness, pride, and fear. She describes what many people actually have, but hopefully not to that total full intent. I am glad to see Will fighting for her and not giving up. I like how her friends were along the way cheering for Will. At times, Will's optimism and smiley-self can be annoying and frustrating. Good job and thanks for writing this.
FINALLY! AT LAST, they get together. Thanks Jesse for that. :p Just kidding. I do admit this was one of the longer stories that I have read. I really do enjoy it, but it surely hurt my eyes because I was reading it at at such a quick manner of time. I do admit, I hate Jesse at times for her stubbornness, pride, and fear. She describes what many people actually have, but hopefully not to that total full intent. I am glad to see Will fighting for her and not giving up. I like how her friends were along the way cheering for Will. At times, Will's optimism and smiley-self can be annoying and frustrating. Good job and thanks for writing this.
6/20/2011 c2 The Imagination Addict
i know u wrote this FIVE years ago, but it's so entertaining i HAVE to express my appreciation of ur story! the main character is HILARIOUSLY SARCASTIC.
i know u wrote this FIVE years ago, but it's so entertaining i HAVE to express my appreciation of ur story! the main character is HILARIOUSLY SARCASTIC.
5/29/2011 c38 3Alinzar
I finished this story last night. It's fantastic! I'm so glad I found it. Is there any chance of a sequel? Perhaps Jesse and Will in college? Please say yes! :D:D
Great job! My only issue was that the chapter in Bridget's point of view sounded the same as the chapters in Jesse's point of view. Other than that, great job!
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3AlinzarI finished this story last night. It's fantastic! I'm so glad I found it. Is there any chance of a sequel? Perhaps Jesse and Will in college? Please say yes! :D:D
Great job! My only issue was that the chapter in Bridget's point of view sounded the same as the chapters in Jesse's point of view. Other than that, great job!
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