for Cute Humor5/14/2005 c1 
39stainedtruth
its actually quite good so far...i would like to read more of it...because the introduction part is always mostly boring except for the few jokes and funny incidents you got in there...bloop
39stainedtruthits actually quite good so far...i would like to read more of it...because the introduction part is always mostly boring except for the few jokes and funny incidents you got in there...bloop
3/11/2005 c3 13XxDragon Princess NikkixX
A very good start. I like the characters, plot, etc. Everything seems to be pretty good. I'm interested to read more. Love ya!
~Nikki~
13XxDragon Princess NikkixXA very good start. I like the characters, plot, etc. Everything seems to be pretty good. I'm interested to read more. Love ya!
~Nikki~
10/30/2004 c2 10A Different Kind of Yellow
Hey, as I never saw the last version, I think this is great anyways. Thank you for reviewing my story (it has 3 chapters, just so you know). I don't know what you meant when you said 'learnt' was an english word. I use that word often. Maybe you meant it was British, coz I ofen use that word, I'm Scottish. Anyway, yes, continue with this story, it's good so far. I'm guessing them meet the second time round through horses(as they both share that passion)? Look at the rest of my story (a little something different) then tell me what you think. Not many people like it, so I'd like to know if I should continue or not. Anyways, update soon!
10A Different Kind of YellowHey, as I never saw the last version, I think this is great anyways. Thank you for reviewing my story (it has 3 chapters, just so you know). I don't know what you meant when you said 'learnt' was an english word. I use that word often. Maybe you meant it was British, coz I ofen use that word, I'm Scottish. Anyway, yes, continue with this story, it's good so far. I'm guessing them meet the second time round through horses(as they both share that passion)? Look at the rest of my story (a little something different) then tell me what you think. Not many people like it, so I'd like to know if I should continue or not. Anyways, update soon!
10/3/2004 c1 Psycho AT
Very good, though with soem gramatical stuff. I'll point it out:
* when speaking: "Hello," she said. you're doing somethign like: "Hello." She said. bad! ^^
*thoughts: do them in italics or / / if italics don't work on your computer.
Not too much, just minor things. Oh, and it was rushed into just a bit, the whole' wow, i get to hang out with her more now,' sorta thing. Slwo down just a bit, turbo, lol! Kep it up though, i'm interested to see what happens.
Very good, though with soem gramatical stuff. I'll point it out:
* when speaking: "Hello," she said. you're doing somethign like: "Hello." She said. bad! ^^
*thoughts: do them in italics or / / if italics don't work on your computer.
Not too much, just minor things. Oh, and it was rushed into just a bit, the whole' wow, i get to hang out with her more now,' sorta thing. Slwo down just a bit, turbo, lol! Kep it up though, i'm interested to see what happens.
9/10/2004 c1 11ConverseOutlet3
I like it. It's usually not something I would read, but I like it. Keep up the good-no, great work!
11ConverseOutlet3I like it. It's usually not something I would read, but I like it. Keep up the good-no, great work!
9/4/2004 c1 13Insane King
IT SUCKED! lol, jk. I'm a sucker for romances lately,at least well-written ones nad not crappy, totaled stories. Anyhow, I liked it. It was good. Good description, not too much that made it highly boring (a fault of my own), but anough to get you into it. Personally I would like it longer, but that's just me. I think you should keep it up! ^^
13Insane KingIT SUCKED! lol, jk. I'm a sucker for romances lately,at least well-written ones nad not crappy, totaled stories. Anyhow, I liked it. It was good. Good description, not too much that made it highly boring (a fault of my own), but anough to get you into it. Personally I would like it longer, but that's just me. I think you should keep it up! ^^