for Poppyseed Muffins Have Feelings, Too1/8/2005 c1 
9Tiger Eyes 1027
It's already tearing at my heart!I dunno if that may just be me. I was always the girl who sat alone and conversed with herself. I, however, thought I would be a famous star someday. And here I am, at age sixteen...BUt it's awesome. The story is beautifully written and I just can't find the right words to describe it.
9Tiger Eyes 1027It's already tearing at my heart!I dunno if that may just be me. I was always the girl who sat alone and conversed with herself. I, however, thought I would be a famous star someday. And here I am, at age sixteen...BUt it's awesome. The story is beautifully written and I just can't find the right words to describe it.
10/4/2004 c1 90poetic abortion
This was weird. But well written. I can't wait for your next story.
~ Crucified ~
90poetic abortionThis was weird. But well written. I can't wait for your next story.
~ Crucified ~
9/19/2004 c1 7vanderhall
Ooh, good start. Gail seems like an intriguing little girl, even if the teacher says she talks to herself. What's so wrong with being different, anyway? Update soon, this is good. ~V~
7vanderhallOoh, good start. Gail seems like an intriguing little girl, even if the teacher says she talks to herself. What's so wrong with being different, anyway? Update soon, this is good. ~V~
9/3/2004 c1 Zaptor
Nice! I like the way you start out the chapter a lot. Very eye catching. The mother was very strange. Her outburst was a good touch. It got my attention. The only thing I'd say is maybe the outburst could have been longer? W/e, it was good.
Nice! I like the way you start out the chapter a lot. Very eye catching. The mother was very strange. Her outburst was a good touch. It got my attention. The only thing I'd say is maybe the outburst could have been longer? W/e, it was good.