
7/28/2012 c1 Guest
skinny dipping
skinny dipping
12/25/2004 c3
126swift sky silver
melikes the nicknames, like allo for allosaur. good job. many questions of mine about the story are answered in the dialogue you put in. you're good at writing stories. keep it up =0)

melikes the nicknames, like allo for allosaur. good job. many questions of mine about the story are answered in the dialogue you put in. you're good at writing stories. keep it up =0)
12/25/2004 c2 swift sky silver
hm... i haven't thought of that before... what dragons can do and the roles they play... and pink is definitely a colour that stands out. great for centralizing main characters. =0)
hm... i haven't thought of that before... what dragons can do and the roles they play... and pink is definitely a colour that stands out. great for centralizing main characters. =0)
12/25/2004 c1 swift sky silver
the title dragged me into this one... it's interesting. i'm off to the next chapter =0)
the title dragged me into this one... it's interesting. i'm off to the next chapter =0)
9/22/2004 c1 Fallen Maverick
A boxing dragon? This'll be interesting. :)
I like the combination of words here, like this especially:
"The dragon knelt against the chaffed ground, his crimson scales shedding needless blood, his bulky physique diminished by battle wounds, his spirit weakened in insufferable pain."
Reading on!
A boxing dragon? This'll be interesting. :)
I like the combination of words here, like this especially:
"The dragon knelt against the chaffed ground, his crimson scales shedding needless blood, his bulky physique diminished by battle wounds, his spirit weakened in insufferable pain."
Reading on!