for The Crazy Old Man9/15/2005 c1 
337Luthiena o Lorien
Sorry if my review is very choppy, but I find that the best way to give an accurate review is to plop things into this little review box as I go along.
I love this line: "That's where he sits,
Looking around and
Shaking his fists."
"He wandered off muttering,
Shaking his head.
Then turned back and shouted
"Hey! My name's Fred!""Love that also!
Poor man. I wanna give him a hug! :)
337Luthiena o LorienSorry if my review is very choppy, but I find that the best way to give an accurate review is to plop things into this little review box as I go along.
I love this line: "That's where he sits,
Looking around and
Shaking his fists."
"He wandered off muttering,
Shaking his head.
Then turned back and shouted
"Hey! My name's Fred!""Love that also!
Poor man. I wanna give him a hug! :)
5/7/2005 c1 8Thousand Faces
::mutter mutter:: How dare someone write a poem that's not depressing? ::shakes fist, exceedingly similair to the old man::
Hehe, nah, I'm just messing with you. I loved this poem and I loved Fred and his hat!
Write \m/ On,
Thousand Faces
8Thousand Faces::mutter mutter:: How dare someone write a poem that's not depressing? ::shakes fist, exceedingly similair to the old man::
Hehe, nah, I'm just messing with you. I loved this poem and I loved Fred and his hat!
Write \m/ On,
Thousand Faces
2/16/2005 c1 15Tempest Epilogue
Very funny and very cool poem. I love the rhyming, especially at the end. :)~ Tempest Epilogue
15Tempest EpilogueVery funny and very cool poem. I love the rhyming, especially at the end. :)~ Tempest Epilogue
2/1/2005 c1 86welchs828
I like this! It's funny. I've never seen one of those people either, but it sound like what I've heard of them. Toodles.
86welchs828I like this! It's funny. I've never seen one of those people either, but it sound like what I've heard of them. Toodles.
12/17/2004 c1 Rhea De'Aqua
W007! I like it very much!Yay!
W007! I like it very much!Yay!
10/27/2004 c1 catseyeview
I like this! esp. your line "Hey! My name's Fred!" even he wants to be remembered or perhaps he is remembered. It does make you think.
I like this! esp. your line "Hey! My name's Fred!" even he wants to be remembered or perhaps he is remembered. It does make you think.
10/26/2004 c1 ReggieLove
again, this is cool. you write about interesting topics, and i like it. good stuff.
-reggie again
again, this is cool. you write about interesting topics, and i like it. good stuff.
-reggie again
9/27/2004 c1 Moroni's Daughter
That was great. Personally, I do believe that the world will eventually end, but that was hilarious. Some people can be real lunatics. Thanks for your review on Stree Bubbles!
-ttfn
That was great. Personally, I do believe that the world will eventually end, but that was hilarious. Some people can be real lunatics. Thanks for your review on Stree Bubbles!
-ttfn
9/10/2004 c1 54ByFireAndMoonlight
This is good! Thanx fro reviewing my poem, I write depressed stuff, but I also write some pick me ups, just not many. THis is good! ^_^ oh, and Naruto, and Sabrel (Lirael, abhorson and sequals so yeah) rock! Just so you know.
54ByFireAndMoonlightThis is good! Thanx fro reviewing my poem, I write depressed stuff, but I also write some pick me ups, just not many. THis is good! ^_^ oh, and Naruto, and Sabrel (Lirael, abhorson and sequals so yeah) rock! Just so you know.
9/9/2004 c1 7Moonlight Silver Wolf
That is a great poem. made me laugh, which I really needed to do. P.S. I also like the Abhorsen series. great reading.
7Moonlight Silver WolfThat is a great poem. made me laugh, which I really needed to do. P.S. I also like the Abhorsen series. great reading.
9/6/2004 c1 22Loki Mischeif-Maker
heh heh heh. Very cute little poem, if a bit odd.
"People don't heed
his wild-eyed stare.
It's obvious he's
not all there."
LOL- this was a great line; I'm not sure why, but I found it very amusing. The whole poem was quite enjoyable and different from those one usually sees.
Cheers!
22Loki Mischeif-Makerheh heh heh. Very cute little poem, if a bit odd.
"People don't heed
his wild-eyed stare.
It's obvious he's
not all there."
LOL- this was a great line; I'm not sure why, but I found it very amusing. The whole poem was quite enjoyable and different from those one usually sees.
Cheers!