for English Adventure9/30/2016 c21 treshcapital
so i had some complaints about the first half of the story but by chapter 13 i was like "this mf have a stroke or some shit, nigga?" Like when you started tslking about all these completely unrealistic bitches hopping on Gary BWC? and the politically incorrect insults and shit, fam? You feel me? Like when you was calling lightskin niggas "crackers" cuz they talkin funny? Girl bye. This story had potential but something happened around chapter 13 that made you completely brain damaged. The fuck outta here fool. Nigga.
so i had some complaints about the first half of the story but by chapter 13 i was like "this mf have a stroke or some shit, nigga?" Like when you started tslking about all these completely unrealistic bitches hopping on Gary BWC? and the politically incorrect insults and shit, fam? You feel me? Like when you was calling lightskin niggas "crackers" cuz they talkin funny? Girl bye. This story had potential but something happened around chapter 13 that made you completely brain damaged. The fuck outta here fool. Nigga.
9/29/2016 c11 treshcapital
the anti-white comments were a bit unnecessary :I otherwise good chapter
the anti-white comments were a bit unnecessary :I otherwise good chapter
7/2/2015 c17 Guest
Gary pisses me off.
Gary pisses me off.
5/6/2015 c12 EyesLs
Beautiful.
Beautiful.
10/26/2014 c10 Guest
One thing, I really like your story so far, but you can't just translate shithead into Scheißekopf. (Scheißkopf would be grammatically correct, but we don't use that term anyway) It sounds very weird to a native German. Just use this as future reference to do better research. ;) off to reading further! Whatever happens to Tommy at the moment seems interesting.
One thing, I really like your story so far, but you can't just translate shithead into Scheißekopf. (Scheißkopf would be grammatically correct, but we don't use that term anyway) It sounds very weird to a native German. Just use this as future reference to do better research. ;) off to reading further! Whatever happens to Tommy at the moment seems interesting.
6/17/2014 c21 Some Guy in Cali
Idk how to get to fan art... Cry :_(
Idk how to get to fan art... Cry :_(
6/17/2014 c21 Some Guy in Cali
OMG! Post the next chapter right now! I just stayed up ALL night (8 in the morning now) reading your story and oh my god, it's awesome! A little less Gary and a little more Adam and E- I mean Adam and Tommy, please! ;P
OMG! Post the next chapter right now! I just stayed up ALL night (8 in the morning now) reading your story and oh my god, it's awesome! A little less Gary and a little more Adam and E- I mean Adam and Tommy, please! ;P
3/28/2013 c21 Waitin4moar
Dude...dude... Please tell me that you are going to continue. I'm loving this story too much. -tear-
Well despite the fact that its 2013 and you've stopped this like...years ago. I really want to continue it. I'm a gay teenager and I have a crush on my best friend who's straight. (Korean drama much)
This story actually inspired me that there may be hope. I really like the characters, the plot, the twists and turns, everything. I guess I'll just pretend what happens next and that Adam and Tommy have hot sweaty passionate sex. -sigh-
Hopefully you'll continue one day. Thanks for everything!
Dude...dude... Please tell me that you are going to continue. I'm loving this story too much. -tear-
Well despite the fact that its 2013 and you've stopped this like...years ago. I really want to continue it. I'm a gay teenager and I have a crush on my best friend who's straight. (Korean drama much)
This story actually inspired me that there may be hope. I really like the characters, the plot, the twists and turns, everything. I guess I'll just pretend what happens next and that Adam and Tommy have hot sweaty passionate sex. -sigh-
Hopefully you'll continue one day. Thanks for everything!
10/13/2012 c21 The Maiden Moon
(My stupid computer won't let me log on) I love this story! Like soooooooo much! It's cute and funny and just yay! Lol, anyway yeah. Love the story and love u! :D
(My stupid computer won't let me log on) I love this story! Like soooooooo much! It's cute and funny and just yay! Lol, anyway yeah. Love the story and love u! :D
7/25/2012 c21 Mr-WannaBe
I love the story :D
But the Gary and Ashley part makes me sick...
You didn't have to go and did that to her...
Oh well, I like how the Tommy/Adam is progressing and you messed up their names sometime
For the Fan Art if someone had done it please post a link for the next chapter xD
I'd love to see it
I love the story :D
But the Gary and Ashley part makes me sick...
You didn't have to go and did that to her...
Oh well, I like how the Tommy/Adam is progressing and you messed up their names sometime
For the Fan Art if someone had done it please post a link for the next chapter xD
I'd love to see it
3/25/2012 c21 
1Klalista
Not sure if troll or if serious when it comes to the female/male sex scenes... but they sound so hot. I'm eagerly waiting for more drama!
1KlalistaNot sure if troll or if serious when it comes to the female/male sex scenes... but they sound so hot. I'm eagerly waiting for more drama!
10/5/2011 c21 Max R
Love! XD This story is sooooo amazing! I cannot wait for more chapters!
write on
Max
Love! XD This story is sooooo amazing! I cannot wait for more chapters!
write on
Max