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9/6/2004 c1 Author of this poem
Ok "Quilir", there are different STYLES of writing poems, my favorite is rhyming, maybe that's not how you like your poems, but that's how I like mine. You are obviously a DUMB *SS because I would never post a poem that is FORCED for its rhyming, I pick my words carefully. I think your brain deserves better, not the poem. Stupid dumb f*.
9/4/2004 c1 ITS ME ME ME
how mean was 'he who shall not be named'? (jk btw) did he hurt you fisically? ILL KILL HIM! o, good poem, nice rhyming I LOVE to rhyme too, hehhe!
9/3/2004 c1 23Quilir
You sure you want to post this?
All the rhyming is forced.
The varient in length from line to line makes it seem sloppy and unfinished.
And the first stanza, its...well...just bad. I'm sorry.
It has no ties in with the rest of the poem. I think the only reason its included is because it rhymes. And I think the rest of the poem deserves better don't you?

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