for Dreams Of the Children
1239/4/2004 c1 WarriorHeart
Dark, but that is okay by me. The only thing that stood out to me when I was reading it, was that the flow seemed really rough towards the middle of the piece. Oh well, I'm just being picking and everyone's allowed to do their thing, which is good cause sometimes mine are off. Anywayz, keep up the good work!
Dark, but that is okay by me. The only thing that stood out to me when I was reading it, was that the flow seemed really rough towards the middle of the piece. Oh well, I'm just being picking and everyone's allowed to do their thing, which is good cause sometimes mine are off. Anywayz, keep up the good work!