for Peter Dowlin and the Roguemaster11/25/2004 c3 
14biminator
finally. I read it. anyway, I'm loving the story so far. I can't put my finger on it, but it resembles something. Well, it's a good thing, whatever it is. good job. update soon.
14biminatorfinally. I read it. anyway, I'm loving the story so far. I can't put my finger on it, but it resembles something. Well, it's a good thing, whatever it is. good job. update soon.
11/20/2004 c3 2DF Cade
Very nice. Pirates, dare I say...air pirates. (Skies of Arcadia, anyone?)
Good job making it feel...oldly historic, if that's a phrase. But: if its the 'sister' of Heist's pistol...why is made of different wood? Just out of curiosity.
2DF CadeVery nice. Pirates, dare I say...air pirates. (Skies of Arcadia, anyone?)
Good job making it feel...oldly historic, if that's a phrase. But: if its the 'sister' of Heist's pistol...why is made of different wood? Just out of curiosity.
11/8/2004 c2 8Shark
Hey ya know what? It was actually good. Probably the best so far that you have written. Now you got to actually finish it. Seems like a little inspiration was taken from Spirited Away, but mayb that's just me because I see miyazki in everything these days...
8SharkHey ya know what? It was actually good. Probably the best so far that you have written. Now you got to actually finish it. Seems like a little inspiration was taken from Spirited Away, but mayb that's just me because I see miyazki in everything these days...
11/8/2004 c2 2DF Cade
Huh. You stole my tavern. I'll get you for that.
On the other hand, the chapters are creatively named, eh? And the same aura of life (yes, pretend you understand) is good.
2DF CadeHuh. You stole my tavern. I'll get you for that.
On the other hand, the chapters are creatively named, eh? And the same aura of life (yes, pretend you understand) is good.
10/16/2004 c1 DF Cade
Well, its ridiculously bloody well done, just like everything you do. If I was in the habit of giving out money, I would, in fact, give you money right now. As it is, I can merely submit this review.
Se loux croissau, or, as they say in English:
Dispositionally incorrigible.
Well, its ridiculously bloody well done, just like everything you do. If I was in the habit of giving out money, I would, in fact, give you money right now. As it is, I can merely submit this review.
Se loux croissau, or, as they say in English:
Dispositionally incorrigible.
9/10/2004 c1 14biminator
that was brilliant, in an almost abosurd kind of way. well-enjoyed. update soon.
14biminatorthat was brilliant, in an almost abosurd kind of way. well-enjoyed. update soon.
9/8/2004 c1 lkjsdfgkljsadflkjgsdfjg
"Will I be home by dinner?"
"It depends on whether or not you die."
That really made me want to pay attention.
I like the dialogue a lot. (I also like the chapter title-reminds me of how Charles Dickens' chapter titles are all practically paragraph-long summaries. I used to love them). The first paragraph is a little awkward sounding, but then, I'm anal about that sort of thing. I am definitely interested in reading more of this, which I would say is a sign of success...
"Will I be home by dinner?"
"It depends on whether or not you die."
That really made me want to pay attention.
I like the dialogue a lot. (I also like the chapter title-reminds me of how Charles Dickens' chapter titles are all practically paragraph-long summaries. I used to love them). The first paragraph is a little awkward sounding, but then, I'm anal about that sort of thing. I am definitely interested in reading more of this, which I would say is a sign of success...
9/5/2004 c1 Isa Koliki
Well, I liked this chapter very much. It was quite funny. I especially like Delgado. I decided to read the story because in the summary, you said the main character was English. I don't think there's enough English people on this website, fictional or non.
By the way, I saw in your bio you said that London is a cool place. I must agree. It is a very place. Just got back from there, as a matter of fact.
I hope you write a second chapter soon!
~Isa Koliki~
Well, I liked this chapter very much. It was quite funny. I especially like Delgado. I decided to read the story because in the summary, you said the main character was English. I don't think there's enough English people on this website, fictional or non.
By the way, I saw in your bio you said that London is a cool place. I must agree. It is a very place. Just got back from there, as a matter of fact.
I hope you write a second chapter soon!
~Isa Koliki~