
6/8/2006 c1
44R.C. Wulfe
"Goodbye" an accurate title if there ever as one. I like how you described the eternal passage of time by using the seasons, and oh so accurately to.

"Goodbye" an accurate title if there ever as one. I like how you described the eternal passage of time by using the seasons, and oh so accurately to.
3/23/2005 c1
7H.a.c
A very excellent work! I loved how you incorporated the seasons into it so smoothly. Keep writing!

A very excellent work! I loved how you incorporated the seasons into it so smoothly. Keep writing!
9/5/2004 c1
21awakedreaming
Good Job! A really neat way of taking the reader through the seasons to help tell a sort of love story at the same time...I like it :)

Good Job! A really neat way of taking the reader through the seasons to help tell a sort of love story at the same time...I like it :)
9/5/2004 c1
54ByFireAndMoonlight
Wow, this is great. It flowed well and as strong. Well done! *claps*

Wow, this is great. It flowed well and as strong. Well done! *claps*
9/5/2004 c1
17Trinity of Dreams
i like, i like alot
hey look me up some time ok. when you do please read some of my work, thanks.

i like, i like alot
hey look me up some time ok. when you do please read some of my work, thanks.