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8/14/2005 c1 DruidShadow
Hmm...Your story has a good plot to it but you are very repetitive in your writing and you have some spelling errors. Keep it up!

~Shadow
2/26/2004 c1 3Maeghan Jade
Weird. The description of the abandoned town gave it that creepy, post-apocalyptic feel. Good, if a bit short. I just have to wonder, how did the guy die to begin with?
5/14/2002 c1 4Dragon Empress
Cool story, with a good, unexpected ending. You have talent.
9/13/2001 c1 Erin
Mysterious story I liked it a lot keep on writing
7/1/2001 c1 30Parteepants
Very interesting, I must say
2/4/2001 c1 Coool
WHOA that was really bizarre...kudos on the wonderful unexpected ending!
1/11/2001 c1 kitsune-chan
that was kinda creepy and very odd...
1/11/2001 c1 70Megan
hmmmm...i would give this a 6/10 because though your description was good and your style was easy to read, you still had some spelling errors and the ending just seems an easy way out to me. this is still a lot better then some of the fics i've read. keep writing.

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