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9/6/2004 c1 45rhyne
I like what you're trying to say here. (is a feminist...) My advice may not be good... I'm partial to rhyming poems, but I'll try. First, try explaining better what happens when these guys try to seduce you. Go into detail, but don't keep it wordy. I like that you used the metaphor, "dog in heat." That was good, really good. The end was good too. It's almost like you're stamping your foot down. "No more!"

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