for Shopping3/30/2005 c1 His Only
Hahaha! What a great poem! It deffinatly describes my trips to the mall. You really got a knack for poetry. Keep it up!
Hahaha! What a great poem! It deffinatly describes my trips to the mall. You really got a knack for poetry. Keep it up!
11/26/2004 c1 
8Phayd2Dark
lol-thats certainly a twist on the whole mall thing-i was getting a good vibe then its like boom-u spent to much and u in trouble now-lol-
Oh, and in response to how to write a song advice that u asked in a review to one of my things. Well, what i do is listen to music before i even sit down to write a song-not like lyrical songs but just listen to like maybe dance music or anything with not a lot of words or no words at all-if u can't then just listen to any old music. Then you start off by writing a few words down, sometimes writing the chorus first really helped bring out what you want. And as you are writing, keep in mind what you want each line to sound like to music-maybe even think of the beat in your head as you are doing it and it really turns out nice. A song is basically a poem with lyrics-a sonnett if i may be specific lol-but yeah, does that help?
8Phayd2Darklol-thats certainly a twist on the whole mall thing-i was getting a good vibe then its like boom-u spent to much and u in trouble now-lol-
Oh, and in response to how to write a song advice that u asked in a review to one of my things. Well, what i do is listen to music before i even sit down to write a song-not like lyrical songs but just listen to like maybe dance music or anything with not a lot of words or no words at all-if u can't then just listen to any old music. Then you start off by writing a few words down, sometimes writing the chorus first really helped bring out what you want. And as you are writing, keep in mind what you want each line to sound like to music-maybe even think of the beat in your head as you are doing it and it really turns out nice. A song is basically a poem with lyrics-a sonnett if i may be specific lol-but yeah, does that help?