for The Beach Lover11/3/2005 c1 
50Arael the 15th
Not bad. Though free verse isn't really my thing, I will say that this terse poem got the point across nicely. Well done.
50Arael the 15thNot bad. Though free verse isn't really my thing, I will say that this terse poem got the point across nicely. Well done.
3/30/2005 c1 His Only
Wow! That was great. It was nicely written. I could just picture the whole scene in my mind. Excellent job with this! keep up the great work!
Wow! That was great. It was nicely written. I could just picture the whole scene in my mind. Excellent job with this! keep up the great work!