
9/30/2004 c5 Miraclemel WeezerRox
This is such a crap cliche of a story.
(KIDDING) Hey I think your story is pretty good except Sydney's a little too bimboish for my taste. Catherine's pretty cool. You definitely need more description. And the cake thing was a little too cliche. However i've read heaps of really crappy stuff on this site and yours is pretty good compared.
WEEZER ROX! :0 :( :) ;)
This is such a crap cliche of a story.
(KIDDING) Hey I think your story is pretty good except Sydney's a little too bimboish for my taste. Catherine's pretty cool. You definitely need more description. And the cake thing was a little too cliche. However i've read heaps of really crappy stuff on this site and yours is pretty good compared.
WEEZER ROX! :0 :( :) ;)
9/30/2004 c5 Chiabidalda
cool story. Nick is hot. more description would be really cool
cool story. Nick is hot. more description would be really cool
9/30/2004 c2 Rosieposy
Hey! How r u? I think youre storie's so cool except the first chaps are really different from the new chapters.
I really curious about what wll happen next
Hey! How r u? I think youre storie's so cool except the first chaps are really different from the new chapters.
I really curious about what wll happen next
9/30/2004 c3 TUX432
LOL, I love it, I'm going to read the rest in History- thats how absorbing it is
LOL, I love it, I'm going to read the rest in History- thats how absorbing it is
9/30/2004 c1 Iluvcharley
um, you have a few spelling mistakes but overall its pretty cool. if you want I can be your beta
e-mail:
um, you have a few spelling mistakes but overall its pretty cool. if you want I can be your beta
e-mail:
9/30/2004 c4 Karasflowersrock
Howdie. Cool story. My schools not as bad as this one is, but its pretty bad. Hey what is Sydney's background i'd realy like to know. And where is it set, in the U.S? Update soon.
Howdie. Cool story. My schools not as bad as this one is, but its pretty bad. Hey what is Sydney's background i'd realy like to know. And where is it set, in the U.S? Update soon.
9/30/2004 c5 Annathebannana
Hey great story. Maybe a little more description. Nick sounds hot and who's this chase. Sydney's a cool character but I think i realate more to Catherine because I like to read at parties. keep up the good work?
Hey great story. Maybe a little more description. Nick sounds hot and who's this chase. Sydney's a cool character but I think i realate more to Catherine because I like to read at parties. keep up the good work?
9/30/2004 c3 Kiwi girl
oMG, keep writing, I heart this story
Usher rocks!
oMG, keep writing, I heart this story
Usher rocks!
9/30/2004 c3 Kiwi girl
oMG, keep writing, I heart this story
Usher rocks!
oMG, keep writing, I heart this story
Usher rocks!
9/30/2004 c3 Kiwi girl
oMG, keep writing, I heart this story
Usher rocks!
oMG, keep writing, I heart this story
Usher rocks!
9/30/2004 c3 Kiwi girl
oMG, keep writing, I heart this story
Usher rocks!
oMG, keep writing, I heart this story
Usher rocks!
9/30/2004 c2 skyblue
Heya, I Lurve legolas too. You go girl. This so funny LOL! update
Heya, I Lurve legolas too. You go girl. This so funny LOL! update
9/30/2004 c2 skyblue
Heya, I Lurve legolas too. You go girl. This so funny LOL! update
Heya, I Lurve legolas too. You go girl. This so funny LOL! update
9/30/2004 c2 skyblue
Heya, I Lurve legolas too. You go girl. This so funny LOL! update
Heya, I Lurve legolas too. You go girl. This so funny LOL! update
9/30/2004 c1 Trish43
Hey I found this really cool. Jason's is so hot. I love your writing.
Keep up th good work
Hey I found this really cool. Jason's is so hot. I love your writing.
Keep up th good work