
9/22/2004 c1
3MountainStream
Its refreshing to read a story with a talented writer behind it. Ive read the first chapter and am going to read the next because it great - well done!

Its refreshing to read a story with a talented writer behind it. Ive read the first chapter and am going to read the next because it great - well done!
9/22/2004 c1 tisstiss
well what am i supposed to say...of course you wnat to hear thats its good so i'll tell you that. it is great and i wanna hear more.and you know me well, i dont lie, or cheat or steal as mrs simmons may have you think but i am almost completely sincere when i say that i'm sure somebody will snap your storty up and publish it! he he
well what am i supposed to say...of course you wnat to hear thats its good so i'll tell you that. it is great and i wanna hear more.and you know me well, i dont lie, or cheat or steal as mrs simmons may have you think but i am almost completely sincere when i say that i'm sure somebody will snap your storty up and publish it! he he
9/21/2004 c3 Andrea
o0o0o!
Another wonderful chapter. I'm really enjoying reading this. Keep up the good work. ^^ Update soon k~! (WOO, hot guy!)
o0o0o!
Another wonderful chapter. I'm really enjoying reading this. Keep up the good work. ^^ Update soon k~! (WOO, hot guy!)
9/21/2004 c2 Andrea
WOO! You made the chapter longer this time. ^o^ It's going great. I really like this!
WOO! You made the chapter longer this time. ^o^ It's going great. I really like this!
9/21/2004 c1 Andrea
WOW.
Just wow. Your writing is excellent. ^-^ I'm laughing out loud coz it's so funny. Good start!
WOW.
Just wow. Your writing is excellent. ^-^ I'm laughing out loud coz it's so funny. Good start!
9/20/2004 c3 FireHeaD
yeh, your stories pretty interesting.
yeh, your stories pretty interesting.
9/20/2004 c1 Jemma
HEY! i love your story! its so good...you have to update!...this is like one my favorite stories! please update, cant wait for your next chapter
Jemma
HEY! i love your story! its so good...you have to update!...this is like one my favorite stories! please update, cant wait for your next chapter
Jemma
9/19/2004 c3 miniqiduz
Hey Mrs Parker...and ...so on..wow...youv'e got quite alot of reviews...quite an achievement! Any how, i reckon your 3rd chapter is pretty cool, quite funny...hehehe...although you shouldnt affend you 'friends', but its good stuff! well, i expect more updates...and dont start another story when u practically havent even started this one! ok? plus your "fans" hehehe...are counting on you! Any way, im looking forward to "my" intro ( ''; )
from your adoring and loving fan(NOT)
Mini ( ''o)
Hey Mrs Parker...and ...so on..wow...youv'e got quite alot of reviews...quite an achievement! Any how, i reckon your 3rd chapter is pretty cool, quite funny...hehehe...although you shouldnt affend you 'friends', but its good stuff! well, i expect more updates...and dont start another story when u practically havent even started this one! ok? plus your "fans" hehehe...are counting on you! Any way, im looking forward to "my" intro ( ''; )
from your adoring and loving fan(NOT)
Mini ( ''o)
9/19/2004 c1 stef wolstenholme
hi. bye. chris wolstenholme is hot. dont obsess 2 much on ur stoy like claudie said.
hi. bye. chris wolstenholme is hot. dont obsess 2 much on ur stoy like claudie said.
9/19/2004 c3 Abellamy
Who the hell is bumblebee?
Who the hell is bumblebee?
9/19/2004 c3 becstef
how dare you... you unwanted person. shame on you for life. 1st u delete our reviews- doesnt that say something? eh? oh maybe its the truth! face it maria, u are bringing ppl down everytime they read ur story. and u forgot 2 change my name but its too l;ate... im cut. (tears in eyes) goodbye. stef the person who repels on ppl.
hey maria. well first im bimbo and now i dun even hav a fake name! whats wid that! i at least deserve a name!
thankyou and goodbye.
bec.
how dare you... you unwanted person. shame on you for life. 1st u delete our reviews- doesnt that say something? eh? oh maybe its the truth! face it maria, u are bringing ppl down everytime they read ur story. and u forgot 2 change my name but its too l;ate... im cut. (tears in eyes) goodbye. stef the person who repels on ppl.
hey maria. well first im bimbo and now i dun even hav a fake name! whats wid that! i at least deserve a name!
thankyou and goodbye.
bec.
9/19/2004 c3 ABellamy
Wow! this is super! neat! terrific! whoa. like wow. (note heavy sarcasm) nah kidding. yes. kidding. MUSE ROCK!
Wow! this is super! neat! terrific! whoa. like wow. (note heavy sarcasm) nah kidding. yes. kidding. MUSE ROCK!
9/18/2004 c3
2eve-maiden
yay! A new cahpter! It was really good! I can't wait for the next chapter! Please update soon! Thanks, Lori.

yay! A new cahpter! It was really good! I can't wait for the next chapter! Please update soon! Thanks, Lori.
9/17/2004 c2 lilsakura
Wow. Good story! really orginal too! pl update!
Wow. Good story! really orginal too! pl update!
9/17/2004 c2 eve-maiden
pretty cool story! Very funny! Can't wait for more! please update soon! Thanks Lori.
pretty cool story! Very funny! Can't wait for more! please update soon! Thanks Lori.