
3/23/2005 c11 gertrude
hey mia i know its a long time coming but here it is. i've changed my mind about the ending tho, i think you need to intrduce a new character ie scott and i think you get my drift. why did you make nick such a dickhead! why why? anyway keep writing its funny and happy easter
hey mia i know its a long time coming but here it is. i've changed my mind about the ending tho, i think you need to intrduce a new character ie scott and i think you get my drift. why did you make nick such a dickhead! why why? anyway keep writing its funny and happy easter
3/21/2005 c11
1rock 'n' roll junkie
lol I had a feeling Alex would turn out gorgeous. And now Nick is stuck in the picture again? Damn, what a whirlwind of events here. Good, no, scratch that, WONDERFUL story you got here. Keep up the great work!

lol I had a feeling Alex would turn out gorgeous. And now Nick is stuck in the picture again? Damn, what a whirlwind of events here. Good, no, scratch that, WONDERFUL story you got here. Keep up the great work!
3/21/2005 c11 marga
jason is such an ape...i love him!well i like nick too, he is a bit of a jerk ok a huge jerk, but i dunno he sounds hot. keep on working on the story is going well n dnt take so long to update again!
jason is such an ape...i love him!well i like nick too, he is a bit of a jerk ok a huge jerk, but i dunno he sounds hot. keep on working on the story is going well n dnt take so long to update again!
3/20/2005 c11 city-gal7
damn that Jase! ewhy'd he lock the car! i was quite ready for Sydney to open that door and let that b*h fall out! Why did Alex even try to bring the French witch? really now! to make Sydney jealous!
damn that Jase! ewhy'd he lock the car! i was quite ready for Sydney to open that door and let that b*h fall out! Why did Alex even try to bring the French witch? really now! to make Sydney jealous!
3/20/2005 c11 city-gal7
nope! i updated faster! nyeah! lol..good chapter. I really love Chase, he's an awesome man! keep updating! and Alex and Nick in the same room? (scary music)...
nope! i updated faster! nyeah! lol..good chapter. I really love Chase, he's an awesome man! keep updating! and Alex and Nick in the same room? (scary music)...
3/20/2005 c2 estelle liri
Happy? I pressed the goddamn button!
anyways, good 2nd chpt, a bit dragged out but still good =)
gotta keep reading...
Happy? I pressed the goddamn button!
anyways, good 2nd chpt, a bit dragged out but still good =)
gotta keep reading...
3/20/2005 c10 Emilea
heh. thats sweet. u did individuals. mwah. i reli lub this story. so romantic and so sweet. well, not reli romanttic but u noe. heh. ^^
babe anjwl.x
heh. thats sweet. u did individuals. mwah. i reli lub this story. so romantic and so sweet. well, not reli romanttic but u noe. heh. ^^
babe anjwl.x
3/20/2005 c9 Emilea
heya chiqa! i am so tired. hmm. i will go and write mi chapter straight after this. heh. mwah. not writing much in here cz i am so zonked out.
babe anjwl.x
heya chiqa! i am so tired. hmm. i will go and write mi chapter straight after this. heh. mwah. not writing much in here cz i am so zonked out.
babe anjwl.x
3/20/2005 c8 Emilea
heh. i like it how u fank all these ppl. i gna do that in mi chappie cz i reli am thankful. i will do personal fanx to all da ppl dat reviewd for me. heh. u noe, wen so mani ppl review ur story its likei understand how u cant do individual replies...heh.
babe anjwl.x
heh. i like it how u fank all these ppl. i gna do that in mi chappie cz i reli am thankful. i will do personal fanx to all da ppl dat reviewd for me. heh. u noe, wen so mani ppl review ur story its likei understand how u cant do individual replies...heh.
babe anjwl.x
3/20/2005 c7 Emilea
i realised as u go on ur chappies get longer. heh. i find it so hard to stop. i cud jst alwais write da whole storee out and never post out separate chappies. heh. neway. im jst a lil bit pyscho. hmm, i like ur storee a lot. its funni and reli interestin. kinda like life a lil bit. hmm...
babe anjwl.x
i realised as u go on ur chappies get longer. heh. i find it so hard to stop. i cud jst alwais write da whole storee out and never post out separate chappies. heh. neway. im jst a lil bit pyscho. hmm, i like ur storee a lot. its funni and reli interestin. kinda like life a lil bit. hmm...
babe anjwl.x
3/20/2005 c6 Emilea
hey, wen u review nxt time for my storee, cud u tell me ways to like improve da chappie and wot to do in da next chappie. cz i cud collaborate some of the scenes u helped me out wif mi ideas. it wud like help to improve mi story. heh.
babe anjwl.x
hey, wen u review nxt time for my storee, cud u tell me ways to like improve da chappie and wot to do in da next chappie. cz i cud collaborate some of the scenes u helped me out wif mi ideas. it wud like help to improve mi story. heh.
babe anjwl.x
3/20/2005 c5 Emilea
lol. i clikd da button but i dun feel ne better...=P...nah, i feel like im on a natural high. ^.~ neway. i alwais find it reli hard to phrase wot is all in mi hand on the comp screen. and there is alwais like different possibilities for da story direction and i get so confused.
babe anjwl.x
lol. i clikd da button but i dun feel ne better...=P...nah, i feel like im on a natural high. ^.~ neway. i alwais find it reli hard to phrase wot is all in mi hand on the comp screen. and there is alwais like different possibilities for da story direction and i get so confused.
babe anjwl.x