Reviews: Pain | FictionPress

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6/9/2005 c2

10afk
WHAT? but i mean you will tell us when you get totally off this account right?

5/11/2005 c1 pearlsinjune
its a good start can't wait to read the rest.

1/22/2005 c1

19Cookie Gestapo
Gah!

Keep going! ::gonk::

11/10/2004 c1 ShatteredPieces
Awesome chapter! I can't wait to read some more...please please please update
soon. Just so you know...I'm a major slash fan too... email me sometime at

9/18/2004 c1

1TechnicolorPants
Wow Chels, pretty dark... 0_o
I've been thinking about writing an incest angst story, but I haven't had the time. But hey-this is pretty damn good If I may say so myself! Continue please!
xo-KD

9/18/2004 c1

9The Bloody Rose
hey, itz really good! I'm a big fan of yours and I can't wait to see where this story is going!Keep up the good work!

9/10/2004 c1

11Demon-Slayer5
Girl you are a genius *bows to you* i am unworthy. i love it do more it's good i love incest if it's yaoi it good ^_^. keep on writing. Love ya lots ^_^
Slayer

9/9/2004 c1

1dreamer-to-the-core
so sad and kinda scary, but I like your style.

9/9/2004 c1

10afk
angsty! o.O update! arg! *_*

9/9/2004 c1 amz381
great! write more please.

9/8/2004 c1 Moutons Noire
XD I keep being lazy to sign in, lol. I loved it. Yum, brotherly incest. XD And to top it, it's also shota! So yummy. Lol. I like it, can't wait for an update!

9/8/2004 c1

19Nothing In Blood
cool, sombody else is writing incest slash storys. byran is a intersting person. he knows its wronge, but he cant stop it.
awesome start. hope u update soon.

9/8/2004 c1

22demonchild666
aww the poor guy! Great chapter, update soon please!