
9/9/2004 c1 Lil'BlackCat
Carpe diem and carpe noctem thoroughly approve. The rhying pattern doesn't get in the way of it either. It's very songlike to me, I can almost hear the melody in my head, I love when that happens. It reminds me of BNL at points too. I think that was the "roll in the mud... not the same" line. Makes me want to run through the fields singing. Nicely put existentialism.
Carpe diem and carpe noctem thoroughly approve. The rhying pattern doesn't get in the way of it either. It's very songlike to me, I can almost hear the melody in my head, I love when that happens. It reminds me of BNL at points too. I think that was the "roll in the mud... not the same" line. Makes me want to run through the fields singing. Nicely put existentialism.