11/24/2004 c1 1Allison Thompson
I agree with the previous reviewer. The symbolism is very clever, even I did not catch it at first. The introduction caught my attention, and the rest of the story seemed to flow neatly together. I'm growing fond of the author, I must say. Every story and poem seems to be a good read.
I agree with the previous reviewer. The symbolism is very clever, even I did not catch it at first. The introduction caught my attention, and the rest of the story seemed to flow neatly together. I'm growing fond of the author, I must say. Every story and poem seems to be a good read.
10/30/2004 c1 14MarsIsBrightTonight
I really like this piece. I like the symbolism of the locked door at the end and the solitaire game and i like how you go off on a tangent because all your tangents are meaningful and make the writing more interesting. I really like the introduction (the taped bit). I might also add that the blue dots in the circle on the milk carton makes me laugh.
I really like this piece. I like the symbolism of the locked door at the end and the solitaire game and i like how you go off on a tangent because all your tangents are meaningful and make the writing more interesting. I really like the introduction (the taped bit). I might also add that the blue dots in the circle on the milk carton makes me laugh.