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11/15/2007 c1 116loversdream17
GREAT Job! It is another great piece. You have talent. I like how you got your meaning accrossed without spoiling the flow of it. Not many can i know i have problems with it. Great job. Keep up the good work.

Mandi~4~life
5/17/2006 c1 the-narration
angsty, while still exhibiting raw power. i love the first three lines the best. =]
11/20/2004 c1 catseyeview
I love the title to this poem and this reads as one can feel. I like the metaphor of the last three lines, "I cannot love you, no, for I sense the sun on my skin and it burns." Keep writing. crw
11/5/2004 c1 18desolus
*is silent*
You. Are. So. Good.
*is silently pondering again*
At the moment, "One Second Longer" has shost-curcuited by brain.
You craft this poem beautifully. Your words... Ah, magnificent. ^_^ Like water for my soul. I would boost your ego a lot more, but I've just run out of time (class ended).
Word To Sum It Up Before I Sign Off: Wonderful.
10/10/2004 c1 55APersonAndAHalf
...
"you and your words like forever and/your eyes like stars."
...
-Wordlessness-
("Beautiful poem" is the best I can come up with right now)

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