for Forgotten Future1/25/2005 c2 
2Kick-Ass Crusadette
I really enjoyed reading this. I can't wait to see where it goes in the future. There was a few mistakes such as worse instead of worst, but that would just be nitpicking so i won't go into all of them. I hope you continue with this soon!
2Kick-Ass CrusadetteI really enjoyed reading this. I can't wait to see where it goes in the future. There was a few mistakes such as worse instead of worst, but that would just be nitpicking so i won't go into all of them. I hope you continue with this soon!
1/25/2005 c1 82Twilit Exaggerance
Good start. I wish you would continue these stories. Hope you do, i've put you on author alert so i can keep on this. Good writing
82Twilit ExaggeranceGood start. I wish you would continue these stories. Hope you do, i've put you on author alert so i can keep on this. Good writing
9/8/2004 c1 4fazzingaway
ooh! that was a very strong opening. i enjoyed it very much. i loved how the characters have been established and how you've set up the scene for the chapters to come. there is a lot of potential here and i can wait to see you tap into all of it. i d hope you update this again soon :D
4fazzingawayooh! that was a very strong opening. i enjoyed it very much. i loved how the characters have been established and how you've set up the scene for the chapters to come. there is a lot of potential here and i can wait to see you tap into all of it. i d hope you update this again soon :D