for A Fool in Love6/9/2007 c1 
8Angelical12345
It's kind of amusing... I hope you intended it to be, because I don't find it very serious. You might want to fix that on the 10th line, I believe that was supposed to be .
PS. If you add a story onto your story alerts, I think it's only fair you review it some, no? :P
8Angelical12345It's kind of amusing... I hope you intended it to be, because I don't find it very serious. You might want to fix that on the 10th line, I believe that was supposed to be .
PS. If you add a story onto your story alerts, I think it's only fair you review it some, no? :P
11/29/2004 c1 2my-side-of-the-story
lol, turn him into a goat? dat's funi, truly a fool in love. but i still feel sori for her. a typicl poem of the broken heart of a her in modern society... very true indeed
u'r a great poet!
2my-side-of-the-storylol, turn him into a goat? dat's funi, truly a fool in love. but i still feel sori for her. a typicl poem of the broken heart of a her in modern society... very true indeed
u'r a great poet!
9/10/2004 c1 The Frog Queen of ickyickypitangzoopoyooo
hee hee. I love it. Who is he? I'll set him on fire again! Him, and that little punk, Ethel. J/K. Keep up the good work, puella (girl).
hee hee. I love it. Who is he? I'll set him on fire again! Him, and that little punk, Ethel. J/K. Keep up the good work, puella (girl).
9/10/2004 c1 Guest
Wow. The poem is kind of dark. I wonder what things she set on fire. ;)
Wow. The poem is kind of dark. I wonder what things she set on fire. ;)
9/10/2004 c1 Matt91
Hell Hath No Fury Like A Woman Scorned! LOL! That was a grat poem! It shows how wonderful love is and how horrible it is when your heart is broken!
Hell Hath No Fury Like A Woman Scorned! LOL! That was a grat poem! It shows how wonderful love is and how horrible it is when your heart is broken!