
7/17/2009 c5 Fight With Doves
I love this story because it's just that good. (that isn't really a reason, but still)
I like her name, too. It's awesome =)
Please update soon. It seems as if you haven't updated in a while...
Keep on writing!
I love this story because it's just that good. (that isn't really a reason, but still)
I like her name, too. It's awesome =)
Please update soon. It seems as if you haven't updated in a while...
Keep on writing!
9/3/2008 c5 Jenni Marie
Hey there! I have to say, your story is really getting to it! But you haven't updated in a long time... :( Almost four years now, has it been? Eh, I dunno, I'm just checking the update date. :D
But you really, TRULY, have to UPDATE SOON, or else off with your head! :D
~Jenni Marie
Hey there! I have to say, your story is really getting to it! But you haven't updated in a long time... :( Almost four years now, has it been? Eh, I dunno, I'm just checking the update date. :D
But you really, TRULY, have to UPDATE SOON, or else off with your head! :D
~Jenni Marie
6/8/2008 c5
1alittlemagic
i love this story!
and her name is so cool, haha,
west was so mean to her, though it made sense since she was a bitch before. this story is great! update sooner! can't wait!
:)

i love this story!
and her name is so cool, haha,
west was so mean to her, though it made sense since she was a bitch before. this story is great! update sooner! can't wait!
:)
6/9/2005 c5 IntentionallyLeftBlank
hello!
...looks like this one's reached it's end... why haven't i reviewed before? anyways, i love this story... please update... eventually...
-INK-
hello!
...looks like this one's reached it's end... why haven't i reviewed before? anyways, i love this story... please update... eventually...
-INK-
1/19/2005 c5 captain r3tardo
please update soon! its been...months!
please update soon! its been...months!
1/6/2005 c5
4Jolly B
That was so awesome. It's so dramatic, and..i dunno. I'm just hooked. i'm seriously liking it.anyways update k.toodles.

That was so awesome. It's so dramatic, and..i dunno. I'm just hooked. i'm seriously liking it.anyways update k.toodles.
12/3/2004 c5
1vampireriley1989
update, update, UPDATE! if u dont ill go semi postal on u or chuck heavy objects at you...anyways...i like this story!

update, update, UPDATE! if u dont ill go semi postal on u or chuck heavy objects at you...anyways...i like this story!
11/26/2004 c5
12annikodomo
Aw...poor Fe...I know that she was really a bitch at first, but West was being so mean! This is really interesting...update!

Aw...poor Fe...I know that she was really a bitch at first, but West was being so mean! This is really interesting...update!
11/3/2004 c1 jen
UPDATE! PLEASE! I'M DESPERATE having said that good job
UPDATE! PLEASE! I'M DESPERATE having said that good job
10/24/2004 c5 LovingThisStory
it's good, please update soon
it's good, please update soon
10/12/2004 c5
7Tainted Tears
Brilliant. Fe's beginning personality definitely struck an image of how cold-hearted she is. As anyone else, I'm enjoying this new Fe.
West sure was harsh. I was ACTUALLY surprised at his sharp-tongued comments, yet I suppose it wasn't his fault that he didn't know. Though, from my observations, wouldn't gossip that is about someone who is as... special as Fe would get out as fast as the fast lane? Hm, I suppose not.
Nevertheless, very impressive. Your writing is very good. It's realistic and believable. Well done!
- Tainted Tears

Brilliant. Fe's beginning personality definitely struck an image of how cold-hearted she is. As anyone else, I'm enjoying this new Fe.
West sure was harsh. I was ACTUALLY surprised at his sharp-tongued comments, yet I suppose it wasn't his fault that he didn't know. Though, from my observations, wouldn't gossip that is about someone who is as... special as Fe would get out as fast as the fast lane? Hm, I suppose not.
Nevertheless, very impressive. Your writing is very good. It's realistic and believable. Well done!
- Tainted Tears
10/9/2004 c2 Elizabeth Darcy
Well, not bad! Definately an interesting plot - with enough to keep the readers on the edge of their seats.
In the 2nd chapter, Fe tells Robbie that she needs to get a glass of water. However, she waits for him and wonders why he's taking so long to get a glass of water - how is this possible?
Anyway, no matter - I still love the story and would like to see it proceed.
Well, not bad! Definately an interesting plot - with enough to keep the readers on the edge of their seats.
In the 2nd chapter, Fe tells Robbie that she needs to get a glass of water. However, she waits for him and wonders why he's taking so long to get a glass of water - how is this possible?
Anyway, no matter - I still love the story and would like to see it proceed.
9/25/2004 c5
4lost-pfreak23
im glad Fe has amnesia, she really was a bitch before, no offense or anything. i think shes really nice now, and u did a nice job wif making the amnesia thing realistic!

im glad Fe has amnesia, she really was a bitch before, no offense or anything. i think shes really nice now, and u did a nice job wif making the amnesia thing realistic!