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3/27/2005 c1 Ryan Nyburg
This is pretty good, well written and effective. Too many self-conscious attempts at style though, such as calling cigarettes "cancer sticks." Not necessary and rather distracting. Also the story never seems to come to any real point, it just ends with a murder which would be shocking if it were possible to care about these characters. Unfortunatly there aren't enough details to do so.
9/13/2004 c1 Fire Walk with Me
Hilarious! Just fuckin' hilarious! Seriously, though, I liked this one.
Keep writing.
9/12/2004 c1 3somefreakylooknchick
Wow. I really like this story. The cancer stick thing reminded me of The Outsiders, though this story is nothing like The Outsiders.
It gave me a chill and my heart jumped. I also liked the ending!

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