for The Elite2/21/2009 c1 BeanBagChair11
I love a plot like this! I have been thinking about it for ages yet never completed it nor put it up! please, PLEASE update! :D
I love a plot like this! I have been thinking about it for ages yet never completed it nor put it up! please, PLEASE update! :D
4/21/2005 c1 
2TwinGrapeJellies
Read AL of the outcast and loved it greatly. now...i read this and some common names with some of my characters. pretty creepy. . but yeh! liked it..loved it...want some more of it...now! lol. im jp. take ur time. but hey! im here to complain...*wails* now im gonna go find a sandwich that will magically appear and u must write...yay!
lol
goodluck.
2TwinGrapeJelliesRead AL of the outcast and loved it greatly. now...i read this and some common names with some of my characters. pretty creepy. . but yeh! liked it..loved it...want some more of it...now! lol. im jp. take ur time. but hey! im here to complain...*wails* now im gonna go find a sandwich that will magically appear and u must write...yay!
lol
goodluck.
10/20/2004 c1 14Grape
Wow this is really great! I like how you have all the main characters there with their lives and showing the reader as to why they wanted to leave, and how they become what they do. This is simply fabulous so you must get the next chapter up soon!
14GrapeWow this is really great! I like how you have all the main characters there with their lives and showing the reader as to why they wanted to leave, and how they become what they do. This is simply fabulous so you must get the next chapter up soon!
9/16/2004 c1 1MyVeryOwnDreamland
i like it, is she or he a girl or a boy cuz you said i cant live with him anymore, i want her to suceed in life
1MyVeryOwnDreamlandi like it, is she or he a girl or a boy cuz you said i cant live with him anymore, i want her to suceed in life
9/13/2004 c1 13Bridge Ann Wall
That's a good beginning. There are some parts where the wording is a little confusing, or where he and she might be mixed up, but otherwise it is really good. The story seems interesting. Keep up the good work.
13Bridge Ann WallThat's a good beginning. There are some parts where the wording is a little confusing, or where he and she might be mixed up, but otherwise it is really good. The story seems interesting. Keep up the good work.