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9/16/2004 c1 Emerald164
this is very well done, i love the way it almost feels like its exploding out of your head onto paper
9/15/2004 c1 Soulless Consumer
Wow ... this is ... really ... well I can't think of anything else to say, it was really cool i liked the way it flowed.
9/15/2004 c1 131Ashke beloved
yeah u write too much. lol, this is really good.
*Natz*
9/13/2004 c1 6549875654987
I love the format of this poem. The description of the thoughts flowing out of you coordinates very well with the enjambment of the lines. Very nice.
~emma
9/13/2004 c1 3Cry Tears of Darkness
i like this. i have a few comments though. one, maybe try to format this so when you post there isnt a line between each verse. as well, maybe use stanzas to help with your poem? would make it easier to read and give more quality to your poem. nice repitition of thoughts and tryig to emphasize thier impact ;) cool poem :)

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