for Quandaries of a Quirky Romantic11/21/2013 c11 
16Aretice N. Treader
I like Thatcher's grandparents. They're really nice and funny. I saw a few mistakes, such as a comma splice and writing "grandpas" instead of "grandparents," but it's not that big of a deal. I also like Thatcher's Italian heritage.
16Aretice N. TreaderI like Thatcher's grandparents. They're really nice and funny. I saw a few mistakes, such as a comma splice and writing "grandpas" instead of "grandparents," but it's not that big of a deal. I also like Thatcher's Italian heritage.
11/21/2013 c10 Aretice N. Treader
That was so sweet of Thatcher! I wonder why Angie's being such a bad friend... This chapter was good.
That was so sweet of Thatcher! I wonder why Angie's being such a bad friend... This chapter was good.
11/21/2013 c9 Aretice N. Treader
You made a couple of mistakes. The biggest mistake, in my opinion, was changing the verb tense when Thatcher was talking to his grandfather. I'm not sure if that's actually a mistake, but I think it could be. This chapter was still pretty good.
You made a couple of mistakes. The biggest mistake, in my opinion, was changing the verb tense when Thatcher was talking to his grandfather. I'm not sure if that's actually a mistake, but I think it could be. This chapter was still pretty good.
11/8/2013 c8 Aretice N. Treader
There was a homophone switch ("your" instead of "you're"), but it's all right. Also, I think periods and commas usually go within quotation marks. This chapter revealed quite a bit of Thatcher's personality, but it wasn't too obvious. Good job!
There was a homophone switch ("your" instead of "you're"), but it's all right. Also, I think periods and commas usually go within quotation marks. This chapter revealed quite a bit of Thatcher's personality, but it wasn't too obvious. Good job!
11/8/2013 c7 Aretice N. Treader
I noticed more mistakes in this chapter than the last one, but it's no big deal. I'm kind of wondering about what will happen to Huey... Good chapter, nonetheless.
I noticed more mistakes in this chapter than the last one, but it's no big deal. I'm kind of wondering about what will happen to Huey... Good chapter, nonetheless.
11/8/2013 c6 Aretice N. Treader
Nadine's smart, losing Thatcher so quickly. I found a couple of mistakes, one being a missing word, but other than a few, this chapter was written very well.
Nadine's smart, losing Thatcher so quickly. I found a couple of mistakes, one being a missing word, but other than a few, this chapter was written very well.
11/8/2013 c5 Aretice N. Treader
I found a few mistakes, but not very many. I like seeing things from Nadine's perspective. Her thought process is funny. Good job!
I found a few mistakes, but not very many. I like seeing things from Nadine's perspective. Her thought process is funny. Good job!
11/8/2013 c4 Aretice N. Treader
I really enjoy reading about Nadine's family. It makes me wish I could have a family as crazy as that... minus the crazy part. I didn't really see any mistakes, so... Good job!
I really enjoy reading about Nadine's family. It makes me wish I could have a family as crazy as that... minus the crazy part. I didn't really see any mistakes, so... Good job!
11/8/2013 c3 Aretice N. Treader
Thatcher's point of view is... interesting, to say the least. I like the Italian background, too. I found some overused semi-colons, but I don't think those are necessarily mistakes. Just... preference. I still liked this chapter, though.
Thatcher's point of view is... interesting, to say the least. I like the Italian background, too. I found some overused semi-colons, but I don't think those are necessarily mistakes. Just... preference. I still liked this chapter, though.
11/7/2013 c2 Aretice N. Treader
I like Nadine's family. They seem... interesting, to say the least. There were a couple of mistakes (like writing "no suck luck" instead of "no such luck), but this chapter was still good.
I like Nadine's family. They seem... interesting, to say the least. There were a couple of mistakes (like writing "no suck luck" instead of "no such luck), but this chapter was still good.
11/7/2013 c1 Aretice N. Treader
I like the humor in this chapter. It's a nice opening for what seems like a light-hearted story at the moment. I have a tip, but it's really just my style preference. Usually, a word that is meant to show sarcasm is in quotation marks, not apostrophes. So, instead of 'conveniently,' it would be "conveniently." But I don't think it's a big deal when you look at the story as a whole.
I like the humor in this chapter. It's a nice opening for what seems like a light-hearted story at the moment. I have a tip, but it's really just my style preference. Usually, a word that is meant to show sarcasm is in quotation marks, not apostrophes. So, instead of 'conveniently,' it would be "conveniently." But I don't think it's a big deal when you look at the story as a whole.
9/15/2013 c19 Anon
OMG UR KILLING ME THIS STORY IS SO CUTE IT CANT BE HEALTHY TO - AT THE END OF EVERY CHAPTER - SIT BACK THROW MY HANDS UP AND BE LIKE THIS IS SO CUTE AKSJDHFGAUSHAG
I freaking love them! He's so cute and she's so weird and awwwwwwhhh im smiling way too harddd
OMG UR KILLING ME THIS STORY IS SO CUTE IT CANT BE HEALTHY TO - AT THE END OF EVERY CHAPTER - SIT BACK THROW MY HANDS UP AND BE LIKE THIS IS SO CUTE AKSJDHFGAUSHAG
I freaking love them! He's so cute and she's so weird and awwwwwwhhh im smiling way too harddd
6/20/2013 c3 D
Wow... Thatcher really is the bad boy huh? I wonder what is beneath that stony facade of his... And you did get his personality down! He's a total natural; or maybe you're a total natural? Wow, Meghan is really blackmailing him. Interesting. I wonder how the two of them: Thatcher and Nadine will act when they're together... Hm...
Wow... Thatcher really is the bad boy huh? I wonder what is beneath that stony facade of his... And you did get his personality down! He's a total natural; or maybe you're a total natural? Wow, Meghan is really blackmailing him. Interesting. I wonder how the two of them: Thatcher and Nadine will act when they're together... Hm...
6/20/2013 c2 Guest
Lol, that was funny! I LOVE the trash scene! Even though it's only chapter two, it's so cute! But the thing that turned me off was Thatcher smoking. Other than that, I would have deemed him... hot and chivalrous! I love how she isn't going all mushy/gaga over him. Perfect! Nadine is really funny too. Awesome!
Lol, that was funny! I LOVE the trash scene! Even though it's only chapter two, it's so cute! But the thing that turned me off was Thatcher smoking. Other than that, I would have deemed him... hot and chivalrous! I love how she isn't going all mushy/gaga over him. Perfect! Nadine is really funny too. Awesome!
6/20/2013 c1 Reviewer
Hm... I'm wondering whether this is going to be an awesome story where the guy falls in love first. Because it's sounding like that. Or maybe the one where the girl falls in love first? Does it matter? Your summary is great because believe me, I wouldn't be reading this if it wasn't. And since this story is already complete, you probably won't bother with this review but I need inspiration. And so here goes: this story is going to be awesome.
Hm... I'm wondering whether this is going to be an awesome story where the guy falls in love first. Because it's sounding like that. Or maybe the one where the girl falls in love first? Does it matter? Your summary is great because believe me, I wouldn't be reading this if it wasn't. And since this story is already complete, you probably won't bother with this review but I need inspiration. And so here goes: this story is going to be awesome.