5/24/2013 c20 Melly
That bitch Nicola still makes me mad and this is not the first time I am reading this but that girl just rubs me the wrong way. I HATE HER
That bitch Nicola still makes me mad and this is not the first time I am reading this but that girl just rubs me the wrong way. I HATE HER
5/24/2013 c19 Melly
Reading this chapter again for maybe the 4th time and it is more beautiful and wonderful than before. God I love Thatcher and Nadine they seem so real, Secretive you are an amazing writer.
Reading this chapter again for maybe the 4th time and it is more beautiful and wonderful than before. God I love Thatcher and Nadine they seem so real, Secretive you are an amazing writer.
5/3/2013 c26 imastranger
This is my third or fourth time reading this and I still feel all the emotions that I felt when I first read it. YOU ARE AN AMAZING WRITER, even though sometimes I catch stray grammatical errors.
This is my third or fourth time reading this and I still feel all the emotions that I felt when I first read it. YOU ARE AN AMAZING WRITER, even though sometimes I catch stray grammatical errors.
4/16/2013 c2 6Ditto123
Oh, I knew that the guy who helped Nadine with her trash was Thatcher!
"I let out a bloodcurdling scream and ducked behind the kitchen counter. Which prompted Mom to scream and since we were screaming, Jasmine (who had been walking by the kitchen) followed suit and screamed.
Talk about the domino effect."
Lmaoo It's been a while since I've found a recent story that can crack a smile out of me. It's pretty hard to get me to laugh, unless it's really, really funny. As in REALLY funny.
Ah, that's kinda like me. If somebody screams, I scream. If somebody cries, I cry. If somebody laughs, I laugh . . . I suck -.-
Oh, I knew that the guy who helped Nadine with her trash was Thatcher!
"I let out a bloodcurdling scream and ducked behind the kitchen counter. Which prompted Mom to scream and since we were screaming, Jasmine (who had been walking by the kitchen) followed suit and screamed.
Talk about the domino effect."
Lmaoo It's been a while since I've found a recent story that can crack a smile out of me. It's pretty hard to get me to laugh, unless it's really, really funny. As in REALLY funny.
Ah, that's kinda like me. If somebody screams, I scream. If somebody cries, I cry. If somebody laughs, I laugh . . . I suck -.-
4/16/2013 c1 Ditto123
"She looked like the Cheshire cat from Alice in Wonderland by now" Oh gawd, I am going to remember that! xD
I don't think I've had the pleasure of reading "The Matchmaker's Best Friend" but if it's anything like this, then I am totally going to read it!
This is a pretty funny, interesting, cliche-ish in a sense story. I love Nadine's name, and I think the way she talked about Meghan and Cupid and the God's fear makes the story all the more interesting. It also makes me want to fear and adore Meghan, the former because if she were real I'd probably find her annoying and a pest (I'm being realistic here, don't hate) and the latter because I know that she'll probably make the story even more interesting and funny.
Alright, well I'm a just continue to read. Don't mind me and this silly little review I left.
"She looked like the Cheshire cat from Alice in Wonderland by now" Oh gawd, I am going to remember that! xD
I don't think I've had the pleasure of reading "The Matchmaker's Best Friend" but if it's anything like this, then I am totally going to read it!
This is a pretty funny, interesting, cliche-ish in a sense story. I love Nadine's name, and I think the way she talked about Meghan and Cupid and the God's fear makes the story all the more interesting. It also makes me want to fear and adore Meghan, the former because if she were real I'd probably find her annoying and a pest (I'm being realistic here, don't hate) and the latter because I know that she'll probably make the story even more interesting and funny.
Alright, well I'm a just continue to read. Don't mind me and this silly little review I left.
3/24/2013 c1 britishbrunette
Hi there,
My name is Angharad and I’m part of a team of readers and writers that have our own blog called ‘the – literary . tumblr . com’ (without the gaps). If you’d like to check it out and follow us, that would be great! In short, we are a writer's resource blog. We provide original and fanfiction recommendations, writing tips, workshops and resources, story critiques and graphics help. I’m an Original Fiction Recommendatory Reader for the blog, which means I scroll through the Most Recents of the fictionpress site daily to find the best original stories and hidden gems that I think other people should get the chance to read. I’m happy to say that I’ve recommended your story to the blog, so congratulations! If you want to see my recommendation you should visit the tag ‘Angharad’s Recs’ and try and find it! :)
Hi there,
My name is Angharad and I’m part of a team of readers and writers that have our own blog called ‘the – literary . tumblr . com’ (without the gaps). If you’d like to check it out and follow us, that would be great! In short, we are a writer's resource blog. We provide original and fanfiction recommendations, writing tips, workshops and resources, story critiques and graphics help. I’m an Original Fiction Recommendatory Reader for the blog, which means I scroll through the Most Recents of the fictionpress site daily to find the best original stories and hidden gems that I think other people should get the chance to read. I’m happy to say that I’ve recommended your story to the blog, so congratulations! If you want to see my recommendation you should visit the tag ‘Angharad’s Recs’ and try and find it! :)
2/3/2013 c26 4Veronica Astoria Hart
I must say that this story threw me for a loop. (Is it weird that I'm a romantic like Nadine, who believes they will die alone?) At first, I was "meh" toward you and the story. I thought this would be another pointless cliché that ended like all the others. But then you started with the drama - and used it in an excellent way. I loved your brain for coming up with this fic, loved you more and ended up hating you at the end. (I mean, I love you and the story, but that ending...)
Your flow and wording were awesome, and you manage to convey emotions while keeping your characters in character. I did notice, however, that you have a slight problem with homophones. I saw a lot of "you're" in stead of "your" and "their, there, they're" confusion.
Other than that, the story was perfect! It made laugh and cry! I also like how Matteo and Matthew are friends. And the fact that you don't curse in your stories means a lot to me.
Now onto the sequel!...On second thought, I have to be up in five hours...I'll read it tomorrow.
I must say that this story threw me for a loop. (Is it weird that I'm a romantic like Nadine, who believes they will die alone?) At first, I was "meh" toward you and the story. I thought this would be another pointless cliché that ended like all the others. But then you started with the drama - and used it in an excellent way. I loved your brain for coming up with this fic, loved you more and ended up hating you at the end. (I mean, I love you and the story, but that ending...)
Your flow and wording were awesome, and you manage to convey emotions while keeping your characters in character. I did notice, however, that you have a slight problem with homophones. I saw a lot of "you're" in stead of "your" and "their, there, they're" confusion.
Other than that, the story was perfect! It made laugh and cry! I also like how Matteo and Matthew are friends. And the fact that you don't curse in your stories means a lot to me.
Now onto the sequel!...On second thought, I have to be up in five hours...I'll read it tomorrow.
10/23/2012 c26 brinalovesyouxx
OMG. i honestly did not see that coming. Out of all the romance novels i have read, i though this was similar and i was definitely mistaken. That's what makes this story unique and i love it, all of it, even those parts where i really wanna make Nicola dissapear. You are a great author and with that big twist at the end, gives a reader a surprise they're not sure whether to get upset or happy that its not one of those cliche' kind of stories. i
definitely wanted more and so im happy that you have a sequel :) cant wait to find out what happens next in their lives and to read more of yout stories :) awesome work and keep it up :D xx
OMG. i honestly did not see that coming. Out of all the romance novels i have read, i though this was similar and i was definitely mistaken. That's what makes this story unique and i love it, all of it, even those parts where i really wanna make Nicola dissapear. You are a great author and with that big twist at the end, gives a reader a surprise they're not sure whether to get upset or happy that its not one of those cliche' kind of stories. i
definitely wanted more and so im happy that you have a sequel :) cant wait to find out what happens next in their lives and to read more of yout stories :) awesome work and keep it up :D xx
10/14/2012 c26 HeadOverHeelsInHate
Awww! I loved his speech! This story is so awesome and sad! Humph.
Awww! I loved his speech! This story is so awesome and sad! Humph.
10/14/2012 c24 HeadOverHeelsInHate
Oh my god! That's so fucking sad! I can't believe he did that! Arghhh! And when she quoted Padme... That was even cuter but still so freaking sad!
Oh my god! That's so fucking sad! I can't believe he did that! Arghhh! And when she quoted Padme... That was even cuter but still so freaking sad!
10/14/2012 c23 HeadOverHeelsInHate
I abhor Nicola. I don't think I've ever really come across a character as despicable as her. She m's a fucked up mess! I hate her! She's destroying Thatcher's life and she doesn't five a damn! GRRR! She's so fucking self involved and greedy. It's all about her. She's so... I just... AGHHH!
DIE NICOLA! DIE!
And please update the sequel!
I abhor Nicola. I don't think I've ever really come across a character as despicable as her. She m's a fucked up mess! I hate her! She's destroying Thatcher's life and she doesn't five a damn! GRRR! She's so fucking self involved and greedy. It's all about her. She's so... I just... AGHHH!
DIE NICOLA! DIE!
And please update the sequel!
10/11/2012 c21 HeadOverHeelsInHate
I'm scared. I read some reviews to this story and found out that this story ends horribly! And the sequel isn't finished. SO PLEASE FREAKING UPDATE AND STOP SCARING ME!
I'm scared. I read some reviews to this story and found out that this story ends horribly! And the sequel isn't finished. SO PLEASE FREAKING UPDATE AND STOP SCARING ME!
10/11/2012 c13 HeadOverHeelsInHate
Awww! That's so freaking cute! I love seein both sides of Thatcher! So damn adorable! Eeek!
Awww! That's so freaking cute! I love seein both sides of Thatcher! So damn adorable! Eeek!