for The Gummi Bear Wars11/19/2004 c2 
9Dr. Beowulf
I laugh! I laugh like deranged monkey! This crap's great! Keep writing or I'll have to send the purple toboggans!
9Dr. BeowulfI laugh! I laugh like deranged monkey! This crap's great! Keep writing or I'll have to send the purple toboggans!
10/3/2004 c7 44Guitar Dude
AHA! I knew she was evil! Only evil people carry around gym socks filled with nickels. Everyone knows that a gym sock filled with clementines works so much better. But nickels are just... evil. Very evil. Anyway, good work thus far. I'm rather worried about the hooded man with Hulk Fists(R, TM, C, etc.), due to obvious reasons (really, who the hell wears hoods anymore?).
Anywho, good job!
44Guitar DudeAHA! I knew she was evil! Only evil people carry around gym socks filled with nickels. Everyone knows that a gym sock filled with clementines works so much better. But nickels are just... evil. Very evil. Anyway, good work thus far. I'm rather worried about the hooded man with Hulk Fists(R, TM, C, etc.), due to obvious reasons (really, who the hell wears hoods anymore?).
Anywho, good job!
9/30/2004 c5 12torn-and-frayed
This is so awesome, Zack! Oh, and if anyone is wondering, I'm Rose O'Brian, the beautiful Irish lass. MWAHAHAHAHA!
Anyways, this is freaking sweet. Like FREAKING sweet. Like, as sweet as brown sugar topped with whip cream. That sweet. So uh, yeah. Keep up the good work!
12torn-and-frayedThis is so awesome, Zack! Oh, and if anyone is wondering, I'm Rose O'Brian, the beautiful Irish lass. MWAHAHAHAHA!
Anyways, this is freaking sweet. Like FREAKING sweet. Like, as sweet as brown sugar topped with whip cream. That sweet. So uh, yeah. Keep up the good work!
9/19/2004 c4 44GreenLantern500
Guys? My apologies. I just found out Hugo Weaving is Nigerian, not Australian. So very sorry.
44GreenLantern500Guys? My apologies. I just found out Hugo Weaving is Nigerian, not Australian. So very sorry.
9/18/2004 c3 19Ayumiko
your story is hilarious!
i would've been in stitches if my parents hadn't told me to shut up (singing comp tomorrow, i feel awful) so...if you're looking to be a comedy writer for real, just take out the author's notes, get it proofread and you're definately going the right way about a career! ^_^
19Ayumikoyour story is hilarious!
i would've been in stitches if my parents hadn't told me to shut up (singing comp tomorrow, i feel awful) so...if you're looking to be a comedy writer for real, just take out the author's notes, get it proofread and you're definately going the right way about a career! ^_^
9/17/2004 c1 3Pillage Productions
Nice, you've got an awesome writing style. The gummi bear wars concept in itself is hilarious. Make teh more!
3Pillage ProductionsNice, you've got an awesome writing style. The gummi bear wars concept in itself is hilarious. Make teh more!
9/17/2004 c3 la femme morte
Awesome. Funnier than the actual event, which is pretty unbelievable. I loved the story, and you need to finish it soon. However, 1 correction. It was a 5 pound bag I brought in, not a 1 pound bag.
Awesome. Funnier than the actual event, which is pretty unbelievable. I loved the story, and you need to finish it soon. However, 1 correction. It was a 5 pound bag I brought in, not a 1 pound bag.
9/17/2004 c2 Penguin Empress
OMG I love this story! Put more AC/DC in it! I was laughing so hard during everything! And would you be so kind as to send me some rituals to Sredni Vashtar, The Great Ferret? Thankees!
Namarie!
~*~*~Penguin Empress*~*~*
OMG I love this story! Put more AC/DC in it! I was laughing so hard during everything! And would you be so kind as to send me some rituals to Sredni Vashtar, The Great Ferret? Thankees!
Namarie!
~*~*~Penguin Empress*~*~*
9/16/2004 c2 44Guitar Dude
Hahahahaha. I loved the "Back In Black," and the staring, and the lunchbox, in all the painful details. Now I need to go block that memory from my mind. Still wonderful though.
44Guitar DudeHahahahaha. I loved the "Back In Black," and the staring, and the lunchbox, in all the painful details. Now I need to go block that memory from my mind. Still wonderful though.
9/15/2004 c1 2OneOnly292
Zack, that was bloody brilliant u *ing genius, who I happen to edit and own the rights to!
2OneOnly292Zack, that was bloody brilliant u *ing genius, who I happen to edit and own the rights to!
9/14/2004 c1 44Guitar Dude
Haha, very very funny. Only one thing. In the paragraph with "pick-up truck" and other obscenities, you BROKE THE FOURTH WALL! It's Logan, not Taylor. LOGAN. Other than that, wonderful.
-The Story Advisor with a Paper Hat
44Guitar DudeHaha, very very funny. Only one thing. In the paragraph with "pick-up truck" and other obscenities, you BROKE THE FOURTH WALL! It's Logan, not Taylor. LOGAN. Other than that, wonderful.
-The Story Advisor with a Paper Hat