Reviews: Old Age and Death

12/2/2005 c1

32Cyro Kraken
wow I could never write those dumb things they are so restrictive your very good

10/2/2005 c1

1Saint Sade
good haikus rock too. so go you again.

7/13/2005 c1 addie pray
Gorgeous. Loved the last stanza.

6/7/2005 c1

15Sahara Hayden
This is really good...my favorite line is "Arthritis occupied joints"...it made me laugh. Great job!~Sahara~

9/19/2004 c1

10JQ3
Great imagery.

9/16/2004 c1

243Manuel Fajar
Ah, Winters brittle ice settles over all. ~m~

9/14/2004 c1

95Evil Zipper
interesting way to look and and present a stage in life that so many would rather not think about