for The Killing1/4/2005 c1 
10DrunkenMonkeyKing
Very nice.
It has a good rhyming scheme which is always good in a poem, but the thing that impresses me is that it tells a good story along with the first and last stanza's being the same for a nice effect.
Congrats, throwing this in my favorite stories list (which I never do for poems) simply because I thought it was that good.
10DrunkenMonkeyKingVery nice.
It has a good rhyming scheme which is always good in a poem, but the thing that impresses me is that it tells a good story along with the first and last stanza's being the same for a nice effect.
Congrats, throwing this in my favorite stories list (which I never do for poems) simply because I thought it was that good.
9/17/2004 c1 108Kirona of the skies
Holy crap, that would make such an awesome story that it's not even funny. You should seriously consider writing one. Anyhoo, great poem. I like! ^_^
108Kirona of the skiesHoly crap, that would make such an awesome story that it's not even funny. You should seriously consider writing one. Anyhoo, great poem. I like! ^_^
9/16/2004 c1 148Moroni of the Mount of Ro
Wow. This was REALLY good. No, I mean REALLY good. I can't even BEGIN to say how good it was! Wow . . . Just . . . Wow . . . .
148Moroni of the Mount of RoWow. This was REALLY good. No, I mean REALLY good. I can't even BEGIN to say how good it was! Wow . . . Just . . . Wow . . . .
9/15/2004 c1 37Fantwriter
Whoa...
Very good imagery =D and details, especially in a poem ^^
good stuff =3
37FantwriterWhoa...
Very good imagery =D and details, especially in a poem ^^
good stuff =3