for Village9/18/2004 c2 
139Raven-ember
Mortire is a meanie! I hate you Michelle! The story is still awesome! I kind of liked it the other way but it's still really good! I wish I could write stories! Can't wait for the next update!
139Raven-emberMortire is a meanie! I hate you Michelle! The story is still awesome! I kind of liked it the other way but it's still really good! I wish I could write stories! Can't wait for the next update!
9/16/2004 c2 7Eddie Wright
It's good, but I think that your chapter should be longer. Please update.
P.S. Review my story please!
7Eddie WrightIt's good, but I think that your chapter should be longer. Please update.
P.S. Review my story please!