
8/4/2005 c1
50Arael the 15th
I thinkyou ought to be at least warned for writing this on here. This work is obviously FAN-FICTION and should thus be put on FANFICTION.NET . And not only that, but you didn't even have a disclaimer for this 'story'. You do realize that if Peter Jackson or the men in charge of the copyrights of Tolkein's books read this they could sue your ass off in a second?
Otherwise, a terrible job on your attempt at story writing. Few can pull off zaniness (especially in script form), and you obviously can't.

I thinkyou ought to be at least warned for writing this on here. This work is obviously FAN-FICTION and should thus be put on FANFICTION.NET . And not only that, but you didn't even have a disclaimer for this 'story'. You do realize that if Peter Jackson or the men in charge of the copyrights of Tolkein's books read this they could sue your ass off in a second?
Otherwise, a terrible job on your attempt at story writing. Few can pull off zaniness (especially in script form), and you obviously can't.