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12/31/2004 c1 hellokittychic31
this is great...

and thank you for reviewing too!
11/14/2004 c1 22MorbidMan
Very nice poem.
10/17/2004 c1 David Stephen
Beautiful imagery! ~David~
9/18/2004 c1 10JQ3
Good work and good title.
9/18/2004 c1 43Toph Gonzalez
Although I cannot deny your talent in writing I would have to say that you kind of lacked some imagery in your haikus... But your haikus are quite unique anyway, it's straight to the point but it still runs deep. Keep writing:)... You should read some of my haikus.
9/18/2004 c1 57teh tarik
Sometimes acceptance of one's pains helps. I can sense the disbelief and hopelessness and desperation of the situation protrayed in your haiku. Great write.
9/17/2004 c1 10Meleny
[Forenote: Writing good, good job.]
Quit it. . . you're depressing me. . .

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