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7/21/2006 c1 awais
honestly, with the brain power i have, i cud'nt make that out :D
12/20/2004 c1 Gia D
It is a good poem. But I feel as if you are trying to say something that you dont really understand yourself. Maybe you should try to tone down the level of seriousness a bit. Try writing something that is suitable for someone your age.
11/9/2004 c1 1whitesmoke
good poem! just thought i'd review a couple more so u wnt bother me *smirk* kiddin... anyhoo keep up the good work miss "HOT AND BOOTIFUL"... heh
10/16/2004 c1 3DHABUZ
ok sheza this poem is very nice but i found it boring tho...
well the flow was awsome and the words were terrific but the plot...
overall rating: excellent poem dudette!
love ailzz
9/18/2004 c1 nahjan
hey, i like this.. as in really really like :) but i think i've gotta reread it to understand it better.. great job, as always ;)
9/17/2004 c1 rd-kittykat
good one!
9/17/2004 c1 anon123
u know all of this, but i'm going to tell u the same daimn thing again for no good reason :)
as always, ur thought process is so deep it amazes me...the comparative line ' the tree of gold...a crusty ebony'-simply intriguing and simply powerful...
the words ruby phoenix feather have a very together feel...like they're molded together, meant to be...weird but there...
so be happy, be a genius, and focus on ur future as Shakespeare's female counterparT!
love,
Me!
9/17/2004 c1 15Yamagata
I felt kinda... i dunno, unfulfilled after reading this poem. It had great lines, especially " A blast of fire leaves a trail of stars" yet it ended too soon, and it was hard to fully comprehend the theme, I feel hope and the idea of humanity being reborn, but... it just seems unfulfilling.

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