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20Lise HEARTS Alan
One of the characters sound familiar in here...A'Marie Richardson. I fought my way through the story though. It was great. I liked it.
20Lise HEARTS AlanOne of the characters sound familiar in here...A'Marie Richardson. I fought my way through the story though. It was great. I liked it.
11/27/2004 c1 12Jubilant Sleep
Hmm...much better than your earlier works. Then again we all must grow. I give this 4 stars. Great work, hon.
12Jubilant SleepHmm...much better than your earlier works. Then again we all must grow. I give this 4 stars. Great work, hon.
11/27/2004 c1 31Cindy Moon
You've really grown as a writer; I can see you've found your defining style. ^^Your work is always a bit too much for me on the shock factor, but that's always my sense of the world ^_~. Beautiful characterization. Keep up the writing!-Cindy Moon *)
31Cindy MoonYou've really grown as a writer; I can see you've found your defining style. ^^Your work is always a bit too much for me on the shock factor, but that's always my sense of the world ^_~. Beautiful characterization. Keep up the writing!-Cindy Moon *)