9/20/2004 c1 Megan Read
this is really good! Well, not for molly, but the story line is rather origanal even though it is composited of story lines I've heard countless times! Nice Job!

9/19/2004 c1 Juli-chan
Molly got up, grabbed the water bottle that was next to Alan’s bed, and dumped it over the two of them.
Why does this sound incredibly like something *I* would do?
Juli: No, I'm forever committed to my trumpet. ::Burps:: ((LOL))
Interesting start, Maddie. Bit short, though. Your writing style has certainly improved... and don't worry, I'll nag you to post more. O:)
- Juli