
9/7/2005 c1 Brando Bush
The human mind is a very scary place, I really enjoy the flow of this one.
The human mind is a very scary place, I really enjoy the flow of this one.
9/18/2004 c1
54orangepen23
Your poem was pretty good. I didn't really enjoy the subject, but that's just because.. i don't know... It should be pray tell, not prey tell. Otherwise, splendid poem.

Your poem was pretty good. I didn't really enjoy the subject, but that's just because.. i don't know... It should be pray tell, not prey tell. Otherwise, splendid poem.