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11/27/2004 c1 34Whitesiren
Oh so cute! ^_^ ^_^ ^_^I dont have a teddy bear but I have a special pillow. I really love this. nicely composed.
10/18/2004 c1 7St. Epic
ok that was alittle cute and cuddly and that aint you (yes i used aint in a review)
9/30/2004 c1 213Siph Speigel
This is absolutely beautiful.
Im very very envious of how well you portrayed the innocence and simplicity.
Makes me feel all fuzzy inside. Ha.
9/29/2004 c1 52Will Klemm
sweet/romantic... wonderful work Ray.
9/23/2004 c1 11mantas
It has a relly good way of making you think about the value of a true friend, which i am assuming is the point. I like it.
9/20/2004 c1 29Agriel
At first I did not think the rhyming fit until I reached the end of the poem and changed my mind. It actually lends a childlike quality to the poem that makes it very effective. Nice work. I like the layout.
9/20/2004 c1 17PagesofPaige
Love it! So awesome...I really really like it. Its so true and real. Love it love it love it!

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