for A Life Without Books10/31/2005 c1 
50Arael the 15th
There once was liberal name XanWho thought he was a clever young manHe would write and rantAbout different peoples' stanceAnd keep them from writing again.
Your poetry isn't too brightYour lymerics are awefully triteTry to expandThe way you understandPoetry and then you should write
A better set of worksThat lack your personal quirksJust keep you mouth shutWith your arrogant smutAnd quit bashing like jerk
You're an opinionated flopWho just likes to hear himself talkYour banter's annoying.Your voice is destroyingPoetry and the free speech laws
50Arael the 15thThere once was liberal name XanWho thought he was a clever young manHe would write and rantAbout different peoples' stanceAnd keep them from writing again.
Your poetry isn't too brightYour lymerics are awefully triteTry to expandThe way you understandPoetry and then you should write
A better set of worksThat lack your personal quirksJust keep you mouth shutWith your arrogant smutAnd quit bashing like jerk
You're an opinionated flopWho just likes to hear himself talkYour banter's annoying.Your voice is destroyingPoetry and the free speech laws
4/3/2005 c1 17TrueToMyself
*Shudders* NO BOOKS? Poor Jack... Another great poem here. Only suggestion: the three exclamation points come off as a bit unprofessional (improfessional?) in my mind. Nonetheless, this was a witty piece.
Keep writing,
TTM
17TrueToMyself*Shudders* NO BOOKS? Poor Jack... Another great poem here. Only suggestion: the three exclamation points come off as a bit unprofessional (improfessional?) in my mind. Nonetheless, this was a witty piece.
Keep writing,
TTM
1/20/2005 c1 183Jo Madden
This is a good one. I love the rhyming scheme. You did a great job on this one. Keep it up.
Jo Madden
183Jo MaddenThis is a good one. I love the rhyming scheme. You did a great job on this one. Keep it up.
Jo Madden
9/30/2004 c1 5Moon860
heh heh, nice! revenge is so sweet...'pecially if it involves a brother or two...
5Moon860heh heh, nice! revenge is so sweet...'pecially if it involves a brother or two...
9/26/2004 c1 6Marry the Orange
It's been a long time since I've found this rhyme scheme being funny in anyone's work... good job!
6Marry the OrangeIt's been a long time since I've found this rhyme scheme being funny in anyone's work... good job!
9/24/2004 c1 Velvet Revolutionalist
dare I say 'cute'
this mother was definitely evil
it's like a crime against humanity
i also think her actions were probably counter-productive to her cause
retaliation and revenge (after the mourning period) is what she would get from me...not obedience or compliance
nicely done
dare I say 'cute'
this mother was definitely evil
it's like a crime against humanity
i also think her actions were probably counter-productive to her cause
retaliation and revenge (after the mourning period) is what she would get from me...not obedience or compliance
nicely done
9/21/2004 c1 A SISTER
hahaha that made me giggle!
hahaha that made me giggle!