
10/26/2004 c3 baby perfectionist
It was a very interesting piece of writing: why don't you update the rest of the chapters? it has an intersting plot line and i like all the cool adjectives..
It was a very interesting piece of writing: why don't you update the rest of the chapters? it has an intersting plot line and i like all the cool adjectives..
10/26/2004 c3 baby perfectionist
It was a very interesting piece of writing: why don't you update the rest of the chapters? it has an intersting plot line and i like all the cool adjectives..
It was a very interesting piece of writing: why don't you update the rest of the chapters? it has an intersting plot line and i like all the cool adjectives..
10/26/2004 c1 Me
hi alison. I know who you are. I know where you live. I was sitting next to you in the omputer room on Wednesday. Good work!
It's so depressing. :(
hi alison. I know who you are. I know where you live. I was sitting next to you in the omputer room on Wednesday. Good work!
It's so depressing. :(
10/9/2004 c2
14redroplets
I don't review often but I had to compliment you on this peice of writing, it captured so much and pulled emotions to the surface just by a few words, gosh your talented... if your intrested in cutting material feel free to read some of my dark poems and such... anyways great job...

I don't review often but I had to compliment you on this peice of writing, it captured so much and pulled emotions to the surface just by a few words, gosh your talented... if your intrested in cutting material feel free to read some of my dark poems and such... anyways great job...
10/6/2004 c1
65Hitsumei
My…fantastic. Words cannot describe what you have put together here, and yet you’ve managed to do so. The scenes are visual masterpieces, the feelings and thoughts written down in such a way that you can feel the emptiness when you read it. Do not let this story fall to the wayside. Keep up the fantastic work. ^_^

My…fantastic. Words cannot describe what you have put together here, and yet you’ve managed to do so. The scenes are visual masterpieces, the feelings and thoughts written down in such a way that you can feel the emptiness when you read it. Do not let this story fall to the wayside. Keep up the fantastic work. ^_^