for Elementz2/27/2005 c3 
17Mercutio's Heir
YAY! Love the story so far! It is a ton of dialouge, and you're going really fast...slow down and it'll be GREAT! Well, it is already...but still! Update soon!
17Mercutio's HeirYAY! Love the story so far! It is a ton of dialouge, and you're going really fast...slow down and it'll be GREAT! Well, it is already...but still! Update soon!
2/15/2005 c2 17pyro-chika611
Sounds like another story I read well actually more like the book series Avalon. It's good so far but it needs to be changed a little bit more because it seriously sounds like your copying it.So had something to make it more of your own.
17pyro-chika611Sounds like another story I read well actually more like the book series Avalon. It's good so far but it needs to be changed a little bit more because it seriously sounds like your copying it.So had something to make it more of your own.