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9/29/2004 c1 52Will Klemm
beautiful...and the occasional rhyme scheme adds flavor too. srry i haven't reviewed any sooner.
9/23/2004 c1 11mantas
While i like the comedy you attempt to put in to this one, i think that you tried a little too hard and maybe it was something of a last ditch effort to finish the piece. I do like the concept here, and the rhyming scheme is good, most of this is well done, but the end just doesn't seem to fit for me. I do like it though.
9/23/2004 c1 39Sakura163
I already read this...
I still don't know what to say.
The first few lines made me think about someone sleeping, but not dead!
I really interesting.
~Mercy

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