for The Mirror9/25/2004 c1 
2Andrew Fin
Wow. That was very surprising. But at the end. Who were those two people talking? I didnt understand that...
2Andrew FinWow. That was very surprising. But at the end. Who were those two people talking? I didnt understand that...
9/24/2004 c1 Magenta
It was very interesting, wasnt exactly scary but it would have been good had you made it longer. very good use of Detail and i like where you got the idea from.
It was very interesting, wasnt exactly scary but it would have been good had you made it longer. very good use of Detail and i like where you got the idea from.