for 112/6/2005 c1 
27HgBookworm
Great song. It seems like you're really missing this person and that you have major feelings for them. Your song is a perfect representation of that.-HgBookworm
27HgBookwormGreat song. It seems like you're really missing this person and that you have major feelings for them. Your song is a perfect representation of that.-HgBookworm
9/28/2004 c1 1Zelia Theb
Can feel the pain pouring out of this one - and the lack of a repetitive chorus is so poetic in itself. It's like, the person doesn't want to have the hurt repeated.
1Zelia ThebCan feel the pain pouring out of this one - and the lack of a repetitive chorus is so poetic in itself. It's like, the person doesn't want to have the hurt repeated.
9/24/2004 c1 50Andrea Lotte
It's pretty good! For some reason it reminds me of Avril Lavigne...I don't know why. I think it's porbably because of the "shower hour" part, because she uses those two words to rhyme in "My World"
My sister just turned her on! better get back to listening to Avril...
Great song! Keep writing!
50Andrea LotteIt's pretty good! For some reason it reminds me of Avril Lavigne...I don't know why. I think it's porbably because of the "shower hour" part, because she uses those two words to rhyme in "My World"
My sister just turned her on! better get back to listening to Avril...
Great song! Keep writing!