
12/1/2004 c1
31willowzbitch
Beautiful as are all your haiku’s I’ve missed seeing your work, I’ll be sure to review more regularly. I love waterfalls and their whole connection with the orient and spirits, you captured the essence of them right here, the mossy rocks…such vivid imagery. Well done.
Chris.

Beautiful as are all your haiku’s I’ve missed seeing your work, I’ll be sure to review more regularly. I love waterfalls and their whole connection with the orient and spirits, you captured the essence of them right here, the mossy rocks…such vivid imagery. Well done.
Chris.
9/24/2004 c1
43Toph Gonzalez
Possibly the best imagery that I've ever seen on a haiku... Keep writing. Read my haikus sometime...

Possibly the best imagery that I've ever seen on a haiku... Keep writing. Read my haikus sometime...
9/24/2004 c1
144loulavellena
Waterfalls...
gotta love them
-probably my most favourite haiku ever-
~L. Ellen~

Waterfalls...
gotta love them
-probably my most favourite haiku ever-
~L. Ellen~
9/24/2004 c1
37negligible fictional force
ah, so much beauty
and imagery in so few lines.
simply beautiful.
literally too.
-kismet.

ah, so much beauty
and imagery in so few lines.
simply beautiful.
literally too.
-kismet.