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1/22/2010 c76 kalle
dude... ryo DEAD! AGAIN! i'm blanking, when did Minashi see Ryo die? loved the reaction of Riku to Ryo coming back w/ minashi... wo... UPDATE SOON!
10/30/2009 c75 kalle
riku and amy are going to be so worried...

wow... that was totally not what i was expecting...

i like how i forgot half of what they were talking about... I kinda started to remember... thne there be stuff i never forgot...i.e. Thief Town... who could forget her life in thief town...

anyway... don't forget schoolwork! :0 and come to Pirates of Penzance...
10/30/2009 c75 7A.J Scarlet
Yeah I was confused about the Minashi thing too...but...HAHAHA he was mastrubating hahaha! My Gods that was...I just said "My Gods"...wow. Ahem anyways, that was hilarious. And I have the same issue as you when it comes to writing...scenes like that. Ryo needs to suck it up and deal, just like a good king does :P. Lol nice one and I can't find the damn book anywhere argh! It's frustrating, I'm actually happy for once someone that got their work published still writes for the dolts like us that still read from FP and I can't sort of honor that by reading the book you published because I CAN'T FREAKING FIND IT! Sorry this chapter got me hyped up, laughing does that to me. ^_^.
10/29/2009 c75 10KatyaChekov
Borderline arrogant doesn't cover it. XD

Mmph. Awesome chapter, as usual. You've had enough of my editing on AIM, so yeah. I won't mention those. Sweet ending, and I wonder when Koite will come back so we'll have more drama and more angst! And also, Riku gets to meet Minashi soon, hmm?
8/28/2009 c74 Tadashii Satsu
Brilliance! BRILLIANCE!

You had me laughing some parts through that chapter, then feeling all sad and depressful at others. Poor Ryo! Yet again, NOT poor Ryo...xD I love his reaction to modern-world things.

I wish there was a day to celebrate Ryo's birthday. I would totally support it. :3 Instead of decorating a tree, maybe we'd decorate Orion...? xD But...I don't think Ryo would like that if I put My Little Pony stickers all over his precious sword. So maybe not...

Anyway. Great job! BRILLIANCE! I was SO excited when I saw that a new chapter was out!
8/27/2009 c74 7A.J Scarlet
CSI:MIAMI! Lol that is hilarious lmao! Well yeah it was a long chapter but I'm glad Riku is back -flushes- he seems cool. Uh...how did he end up in Moscow though?
8/27/2009 c74 10KatyaChekov
Wow, Riku's all grown up! At least physically...poor baby. :(

Geez, I hope Kei's all right.
8/27/2009 c74 kalle
YAY an update finally! love the chapter. poor Ryo, Riku's taller... some slight issues w/ grammar/spelling... but anywho... update when you can! see you at school!
8/26/2009 c74 Roo
God, long chapter is long. But! It's done and posted! 8D And yeah, this is definitely a "shit happens" chapter, but it was an interesting kind of shit happening. And besides, shit happening leads to shit going down, which is what readers live for.

I love how you write for Ryo still trying to get used to everything about modern day society; it's pulled off really well. ...I also love how the first thing Ryo does after becoming a millionaire is make sure that his poor hair gets tended to. You really can't blame him, though. He has wonderful hair.
5/9/2009 c73 Roo
I adored this chapter. XD I've missed not having a laptop to read your story on for the past... forever. And I love Ryo trying to get accustomed to the present and such; you write it all really well and it makes me giggle on the inside.

... Oh Ryo and his Engrish.

I also love the whole bit with him and the pastor. Picturing Ryo getting smacked with a Bible is beyond amusing to me and I'm not quite sure why. I would kill to get a ride on his back. (I could make a joke about riding Ryo, but it's 4 AM and I am far too tired to go there.)
5/8/2009 c73 7A.J Scarlet
GAH I CAN'T FREAKING BELIEVE IT! For some reason Ryo reminded me of someone in this chapter, and I'm crushing on Ryo now! How the hell did you do that damn it! I DON'T CRUSH ON ANYONE! I'M HEARTLESS!. Ahem anyways...I liked the chapter, the super market, the church, the flying, all hilarious. Can't wait for more and the playlists too ^_^ Awesome job.
5/7/2009 c73 Tadashii Satsu
EHMYGAWSH!

I'm officially obsessed with this storyline. That last line...WHY MUST YOU LEAVE ME WITH A CLIFFIE, DIN?

I miss little Riku...well, not-so-little Riku. xP

Poor Ryo. His descriptions of learning English make me laugh!

Your writing, my friend, is BEAUTIFUL. Every time I read another chapter, I realize how much I love the series. :3

Great job! Update soon!
5/6/2009 c73 Kalle
WO for long updates! highly amusing... esp. that Ryo managed to get a Pastor to not kill him and trust him. I like how it took me awhile to figure out that he entered a Church...

Ramen! what we live on. YAY Ryo's gonna find his son! and its not too bad of a cliffhanger.

Poor, Ryo can't get a lot of shampoo... he should get a job...

Update soon!
5/6/2009 c73 10KatyaChekov
Damn, Amy. Remind me never to piss her off. O.o

Also, churches can neutralize the spell. Interesting. And I've been waiting to see something like this. :3 And hooray, Ryo has his son back, and sooner than I expected, too!
3/22/2009 c72 Tadashii Satsu
Awesome chapter!

I loved the way you introduced all this stuff to Ryo. I find it entertaining. Though, I might reccommend a bit more discription...but don't mind me. I just finished an Alison Croggon book; I expect to find EVERYTHING in the world in full-detail after reading one of her works. But, overall, I was jumping up and down with excitement all through the chapter, and I can't wait for the next one! Nice ending! GO, RYO! TAKE OVER THE WORLD! YAY DOMINATION!

Now...I just need to start working on my OWN stories. I've been neglecting them since January...Poor Comet.
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